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May 12, 2026

To:IronFart

No worries. Most important part is to have fun and learn.

We’re Done Being the Losing Heroines: Our Quest to Fix Our Pathetic Love Lives

Chapter:0

May 05, 2026

To:Isoruku D. Envar

Looks better. Explore other books, broaden your mind, learn from your mistakes. How I grew a lot was by drafting everything in a notebook before I even began.

I WAS THE PATTERN

Chapter:1

May 04, 2026

No matter how much you try to debate and argue, there will be people that will not listen. I want all readers to give it an honest review. Does the story make you think and feel. I wrote this all on a notepad into a word doc into a google docs. This causes an conversation between myself: can this be improved? Each tweak is an idea about whether or not I can be a better writer. So if someone wants to say it is bad because they assume whatever, go ahead. I wrote this and I am proud of my work.

We’re Done Being the Losing Heroines: Our Quest to Fix Our Pathetic Love Lives

Chapter:0

Apr 25, 2026

To:Kirb

So if you ask copilot to debug your computer program, are you still not the coder? If you ask an editor to read your manuscript, are you not the writer. It is a tool, nothing more. No AI could write something original and ensure that it is constant unless you feed it lots of content like Oda did for One Piece.

We’re Done Being the Losing Heroines: Our Quest to Fix Our Pathetic Love Lives

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Apr 25, 2026

To:Kirb

I wrote this by myself and used it to give draft feedback. There is nothing wrong with it in that sense. Its only when you tell it to write a RomCom for the AI to generate original chapters that it is problematic.

We’re Done Being the Losing Heroines: Our Quest to Fix Our Pathetic Love Lives

Chapter:0

Apr 04, 2026

There is a lot I want to say but the most important is plot everything down on a notebook before you begin. Lots of information but struggle to follow. Take your time, outline a draft and structure a goal.

Battle for kratar in search of the kratar

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Apr 03, 2026

There is too much focus on dialogue but not enough on world building. Advice is to get a notebook and draft everything there.

The Last Witch

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Mar 27, 2026

"Why not?", "I don't know.", "You don't know?"

"Why not?"

There was a pause in his voice. His heart started beating rapidly.

"I don't know," he said as his voice became shaky.

"You don't know," she replied as she gave a worried look. It was as if she asked a touchy subject.

The most important thing is to explore other people's writing to see their thought process. Best of luck.

These Violent Trends

Chapter:1

Mar 27, 2026

Everything feels too shallow and vapid. The kind where the reader feels dumb. There are times that you want the foil to appear that way but have some respect, they aren't preschoolers.

Rebound: The Ending that Matters is Not My Own

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Mar 27, 2026

It's good but there are some parts with nothing but only dialogue. Space it out. Let the context of words sink in. Feel free to use my novel as reference.

Smile World

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Mar 27, 2026

Your novel struggles to get views because some paragraphs are thick and dense while the dialogue is weak. My advice is to get a notebook and draft everything from scratch. Feel free to take a look to see how I control my pacing and flow.

The Spirit Beside Me

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Mar 27, 2026

Your novel struggles to get views because some paragraphs are thick and dense. My advice is to get a notebook and draft everything from scratch. Though my novel is a RomCom, feel free to take a look to see how I control my pacing and flow.

World Before the New

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Mar 27, 2026

Your novel struggles to get views because some paragraphs are thick and dense while the dialogue is weak. My advice is to get a notebook and draft everything from scratch. Though my novel is a RomCom, feel free to take a look to see how I control my pacing and flow.

S.C.P. Hunter

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Mar 27, 2026

These Violent Trends

Chapter:1

Mar 27, 2026

Everything feels rushed. You need to work on pacing and flow. Advice is to start over and write everything in your notebook before you begin.

Captain O Captain

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