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Jan 08, 2026

It's a little wordy. You can break it into smaller chapters to make it more digestable.

The Sacred Orb - Chapter Origin

Chapter:1

Jan 08, 2026

Keep posting and trying.

Re:My Hero

Chapter:0

Jan 08, 2026

Please keep posting.

Whispers of Tomorrow's Sakura

Chapter:0

Jan 08, 2026

Continue building your writing.

Saltrock Sorcery

Chapter:1

Jan 08, 2026

To:SuheiNakamura

Example, <"It's cute," Yui added.> "It's cute, Yui looked at him. She gently placed her hand over his almost as a nudge of reassurance. "She's warming up to you."

Welcome Home , Papa

Chapter:2

Jan 08, 2026

There is a lot of stiffness to the dialogue. There is so much you can do in order to describe it better.

Welcome Home , Papa

Chapter:2

Jan 08, 2026

Is this a cut and paste of the manga series?

Welcome Home , Papa

Chapter:0

Jan 08, 2026

Nice attempt. Practice, practice and practice. I write everything on a notebook in order to build my knowledge.

Phasia

Chapter:1

Dec 08, 2025

To:TastyPig

Thanks for that. I used Google Gemini to make it which they don't make it easy to edit words in images.

Shin-Seikatsu: The Hero Party Can't Pay Rent

Chapter:0

Aug 30, 2025

To:Mai

It means a lot

Otakus Somehow Have Taken Over The World?!

Chapter:3

Jun 23, 2024

To:Hydre_Ito

Thanks. I did have a more tragic story in mind with themes of bullying, depression, and suicide mixed with Bunny Senpai but 3000 word limit is not a long to describe in detail their struggles and emotions.

The Cherry Blossom Kimono

Chapter:1

Jun 17, 2024

Thank you again for your kind comments. I am sorry for the last minute addition. I added one last part that completes the story full circle.

The Cherry Blossom Kimono

Chapter:1

Jun 17, 2024

To:Fumihito

Thanks, I am still working on the final touches. The ending is not to my satisfaction. I hope to complete the final touches soon.

The Cherry Blossom Kimono

Chapter:1

Jun 15, 2024

To:Bubbles

The details of it's content didn't make me assume that the status to mean that it was had to be finished. I will do so.

The Cherry Blossom Kimono

Chapter:1

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