TrinityNovels

TrinityNovels

As a light novelist in Puerto Rico, I consider it my duty to make light novels that will make a lot of people smile.

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    Oct 31, 2017

    I know the pain of having a faulty laptop (It took me months to finally fix up my laptop's problems), but I'm glad that I'm able to read this chapter. First off, the journal is a good idea--it makes Lucas the kind that is taking this situation seriously instead of that panicking teenage boy nonsense that we're usually used to seeing when entering into a new world (though that might have been covered already). Hearing about the laws part, I'm really curious about Lucas' powers since he is also a renegade. I wonder if he's those super rare renegades with actual superhuman strength (probably not but maybe it explains the super toughness? Though I think I remember that renegades usually are that tough). Either way, I'm also curious about Rio's other two laws that weren't explained. But that reminds me--If a renegade considers the first law he finds out his first, then according to the past story of Rio, she discovered the Reaper's embrace law first before the other 3 skills, didn't she? I just got curious about this while I was writing this comment.

    And finally, dude, you really know how to make Rio so adorable it hurts my insides. I thought she was just going to be more and more confident and keep up with mocking Lucas, but I can see now that Rio can also be flustered when given the right compliments. Very nice. I like that turnabout. Makes me curious about how Rio herself will deal with this after being dealt with a praise straight from the heart.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

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    Parable of the Renegades [BETA Version]
    Chapter:19


    Sep 29, 2017

    To:Jio Kurenai

    Reading your comment was like a fresh breeze. Thanks for so much input on tour thoughts. Things have been really crazy here since hurricane Maria passed through here (I live in Puerto Rico, so you can guess how that went). I didn't had a single lick of power or internet since then, so when I finally got it on my phone, I saw this and felt alright now xD

    Okay, onto the story:
    Thanks to your suggestions, I focused really hard on the descriptions. It was fairly difficult, but I'm glad that I pulled it off if it made that kind of reaction.

    I thought sudden changing the era from medieval times to the modern era was a bit much, but I see that it was a good take (and necessary for the plot later on)

    I'm SOOO glad that you like Kuki and Raika. They are integral in the story ever since I made this story up. They're going to be part of the main cast, so I'm glad that they're fond of. Also, I got the name from Google translator... So yeah their names are a little weird, so please forgive me for that since I grew front of their names (maybe I'll change the wording, but we'll see).

    Currently, the next volume won't show Hinota's path, but I guarantee that the NEXT volume will (it was actually part of the plans. You lucky guesser, you...). I'm really excited to re-write it so I hope it's to your liking, and I hope you'll have the patience to read it.

    I finally got my laptop in order, but now the internal battery is busted :/ there's always something happening to my laptop. My luck just keeps getting worse, apparently. But still, seeing your praises, this day felt good so far xD

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    Hour Empty Child
    Chapter:80