Sep 29, 2017
To:Jio Kurenai
Reading your comment was like a fresh breeze. Thanks for so much input on tour thoughts. Things have been really crazy here since hurricane Maria passed through here (I live in Puerto Rico, so you can guess how that went). I didn't had a single lick of power or internet since then, so when I finally got it on my phone, I saw this and felt alright now xD
Okay, onto the story:
Thanks to your suggestions, I focused really hard on the descriptions. It was fairly difficult, but I'm glad that I pulled it off if it made that kind of reaction.
I thought sudden changing the era from medieval times to the modern era was a bit much, but I see that it was a good take (and necessary for the plot later on)
I'm SOOO glad that you like Kuki and Raika. They are integral in the story ever since I made this story up. They're going to be part of the main cast, so I'm glad that they're fond of. Also, I got the name from Google translator... So yeah their names are a little weird, so please forgive me for that since I grew front of their names (maybe I'll change the wording, but we'll see).
Currently, the next volume won't show Hinota's path, but I guarantee that the NEXT volume will (it was actually part of the plans. You lucky guesser, you...). I'm really excited to re-write it so I hope it's to your liking, and I hope you'll have the patience to read it.
I finally got my laptop in order, but now the internal battery is busted :/ there's always something happening to my laptop. My luck just keeps getting worse, apparently. But still, seeing your praises, this day felt good so far xD