Jul 22, 2021
I think you have a lot of good ideas here. But I feel like the writing holds it back a bit. The dialogue is in-your-face and has a boldness, but it's still missing the same thing I noted earlier. It feels completely different than how it started off. It seems rushed, so I'm a bit disappointed.
Maybe, it's a personal preference. It's eye-catching to me, but I feel like it's missing depth.