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Jul 29, 2021

To:Workaholic

Maybe I'll have him come back in a later chapter at some point. Not in volume 1 though. Could be an easy transition into an arc against the Priesthood.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:7

Jul 29, 2021

To:Workaholic

Yes, it's revealed later. There's a reason why her old companions aren't around. And it's the very reason she hesitates to see them. I'll add something there to make it more obvious that's she's afraid.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:6

Jul 29, 2021

To:Workaholic

Does Snazzy worry about such details when he comes up with stupid ideas? Not really.

Epilogue: Augusto's flagrant behavior was found by the Priesthood and he was hung soon after.
Maybe? I don't know. Out of Snazzy's sight. Out of mind.

But seriously, I really didn't think to much beyond the comic relief result.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:7

Jul 29, 2021

To:Workaholic

I would surely like to think he knew what he was doing. At least, I hope so. I really don't know. lol

Maribell used to use Adelton as a hub for their guild activities, so she hesitates, wondering if she'll run into them after all this time.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:6

Jul 28, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

It's supposed to be a roller coaster of emotions. I would be doing a disservice if I didn't.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:15

Jul 28, 2021

I noticed that the jokes this time feel a little forced. It doesn't have the same punch as previous chapters.
I felt a little lost this time because the dialogue was rapid fire, without much of a break to separate what is going on. Too much reliance on telling the events in the dialogue itself.

Why I Write

Chapter:6

Jul 28, 2021

To:Deleted User

That's totally up to you. I just put it on the list.
The writing is obviously catering to a specific audience, so you're making some pretty normal assumptions. The writing is deliberately divisive in terms of opinion, and will continue to be.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:2

Jul 28, 2021

To:asiantongsui

Hurry Snazzy, run away!!!

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:14

Jul 28, 2021

To:Clowniac

I get hints of what you were trying to do. It's just that the words he say ran contradictory to that.
Given him being a bitter hardass, I almost expected him to threaten Ven somehow to drive her away, rather than use reason. He said didn't do a single good thing, not even by saving her, so it almost seemed like you were going to follow up with a (fake) agenda as to why he did, in order to scare her off.

A Whisper in Scarlet

Chapter:8

Jul 28, 2021

Ok, so Eujin did laugh at her. Something about his character feels a little contradictory. Not sure if it's intentional.
He goes through a pretty long speech about how she should be like him, but his words make it should like he's trying his best to look out for her. He sounds a little much like the standard 'sensei that experienced too much shit himself and will break down and teach the successor how to avoid all that'.
I wonder if there could be a bit more grit and intimidation to really make it feel like Ven shouldn't follow in his (terrible, but self-ware) footsteps. That would really make it seem headstrong for Ven to ask him anyways.
As it is, I feel too much of the 'Eujin's got a good head so he'll make a good teacher' vibe.

A Whisper in Scarlet

Chapter:8

Jul 28, 2021

Is it strange of me to think that Eujin wouldn't be so good-natured to simply be surprised at her wanting to be a killer? I mean, she just lost everything she knew and there were obvious signs that she displayed that anger from it. As a killer, Eujin should be able to smell it on her.
I almost want to laugh at her foolishness in Eujin's shoes.

A Whisper in Scarlet

Chapter:7

Jul 28, 2021

I kind of wonder if it couldn't be more scary. If a dream started out with stuff on fire and the mother already a monster, my mind tends to tell itself that it's a dream, because of how immediate that distortion is from reality.
Whereas, a sense of horror from it feeling semi-real at first, only to morph into full blown craziness has always got my leaping out of bed. But maybe, that's just me.

A Whisper in Scarlet

Chapter:6

Jul 28, 2021

To:Clowniac

I had more of an Ace Attorney kind of hype here. The boxing comes later. 😛

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:5

Jul 28, 2021

To:Supersession

That beginning part before 'Welcome to the Afterlife' was just my tendency to describe what I'm visualizing, since he wakes up not really sure what happened to him. His death didn't really register until he is told.
I'll see what I can do with it when polish is needed.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:2

Jul 26, 2021

To:Gurg

HOLD MY GEORGIE!!!

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:14

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