Jan 13, 2025
I was sorta joking when I said that the ending should turn out this way. 😂
Jokes aside. Congrats on finishing just under the word count. I could tell that the last few were trying not to butt right up to the max, but hey, at least it ended without you having to shave off 20k or something. 😎
I still think Kururu was the star of the show (maybe you thought so too, given she voiced the epilogue). But anyways, I enjoyed my romp around the digitial, non-SAO world. 😏
Now, thought I'd end this with a little bit of feedback. When I think of Memoria (and your writing in general), something called 'Jiro ramen' comes to mind. It's hefty. It pops you in the mouth with strong and rich flavors. There's a giant ass amount of toppings that you may or may not want. Some people love the hell out of it, while others may feel that it's a bit too much distracting from the ramen. And sometimes, it makes you look up at the creator and wonder, 'your shops a mess, but I came back for more anyways'.
It doesn't have to be the best by any measure. You find those that like your style and you dig deep into it. That's how I see Kit writing. Good luck with the contest!
