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registered at: Nov 24, 2024

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Dec 30, 2024

To:Slow

Calla definitely wasn't too happy about that either 😂

Finding Ezri: 12 Years into the Future

Chapter:3

Dec 30, 2024

To:Slow

Happy to hear it! The time travel theme often comes with things that confuse me, so I'm attempting to make sense of it. 😅

Finding Ezri: 12 Years into the Future

Chapter:2

Dec 25, 2024

To:Slow

Thank you! Glad you like it.

Finding Ezri: 12 Years into the Future

Chapter:1

Dec 23, 2024

Ahh, a Neverland-inspired story I'm guessing so far? Love the concept and the characters seem interesting. Poor Russell though!

War in Nevertown

Chapter:1

Dec 21, 2024

Loved the dialogue between Archie and Jiro. The reveal that Jiro is "dead" to the reader was also a very well-appreciated twist. The world of the Digiscape is an intriguing concept that makes you want to learn more. I'd definitely like to read more of this 👍

Memoria

Chapter:2

Dec 18, 2024

To:Kumin the Hen

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😊

Finding Ezri: 12 Years into the Future

Chapter:0

Dec 17, 2024

To:Bubbles

Thank you so much for your feedback! Very in-depth and extremely helpful. You've made some very valid points and it's given me some things to re-evaluate. Hopefully, I was able to do everything you mentioned better in the later chapters - if not, there's always time for improvement, and I'll just have to try harder!

Thank you again😊

Finding Ezri: 12 Years into the Future

Chapter:1

Dec 17, 2024

Wow, this chapter took me by surprise. I wasn't expecting the ending, and it makes me curious to read more. You also did a good job describing the world from her view, a "city above a city" sounds so cool. Looks like an intriguing story so far! 😊

Experience II

Chapter:1

Dec 15, 2024

Zipper seems like a fun character, I hope she realizes being 24 isn't the end of the world 🤣This looks like it'd be an interesting story so far, good work

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:1

Dec 14, 2024

I really like the way you describe the atmosphere, I could picture everything in my head. Your writing style is nice, and so far I'm intrigued to see where this goes!

When Clouds Have Cried

Chapter:1

Dec 10, 2024

To:Myranda1554

Only time shall tell... 😉Thank you for reading!

Finding Ezri: 12 Years into the Future

Chapter:7

Dec 09, 2024

To:Myranda1554

Me neither lol, she's definitely something else! Thank you so much for reading and commenting, means a lot. \ (^o^) /

Finding Ezri: 12 Years into the Future

Chapter:1

Dec 09, 2024

Interesting start! I'm curious to see the purpose of Shion's mission and how the Upper society is like. Very good concept so far!

The Nietzsche Protocol (TNP): The Cult

Chapter:1

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