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mindokusai

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World record in slow writing, mostly experimenting with my stories.

Feedback always appreciated :)

registered at: Apr 07, 2025

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Jan 17, 2026

To:Earlo_18

Glad it came out that way, even though their fight wasn't as emotionally charged as I wanted.

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:16

Jan 17, 2026

To:Earlo_18

going by that order I assume Ryu is your most favorite >:3

Also thank you for reading this far, it means a lot and your comments made my days ✨

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:17

Jan 16, 2026

To:rainchip

I think the cover has a charm to it ;)

Morning Standoff

Chapter:1

Jan 15, 2026

A lot unfolded in this chapter.

I loved the exploration of feeble presence tbh. Most suppressing abilities or spells only seen as cool tools but kuro didn't want to just blend in, he wanted to truly live and be seen.

characterization through the magic system 🔥

THE TALE OF A MODERN DAY DEMON KING

Chapter:11

Jan 15, 2026

"We're merely actors in a play where the final scene never changes."

You didn't need to go that hard in a cat's morning story 😆🔥

Lovely read :)

Morning Standoff

Chapter:1

Jan 14, 2026

To:Charles 9hunter

Be careful it's a scam

Knights of Vein

Chapter:1

Jan 14, 2026

To:Sammi9519

Be careful it's probably a scammer

That's Professor to You

Chapter:1

Jan 14, 2026

The anguish of a relationship with a famous person is too real in this chapter 😖

When RYO Met Neko-chan

Chapter:15

Jan 13, 2026

To:Sammi9519

I made chapters shorter with the intention to make it more readable (especially on mobile) but maybe I over did it.

And yes, you're correct. She cleaned the person and buried it the later scene. She's been a funny and indifferent character so far and I wanted to show her more serious side.

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:3

Jan 13, 2026

To:Sammi9519

Gotcha! Now that you pointed me I can see it.

Scenes with the pack of matches and the scene when they teleported to the yellow zone could use some polishing.

Thank you for your time, it means a lot💖💖

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:3

Jan 13, 2026

To:Sammi9519

Good to know, can I know where it was choppy in particular?

(Looks like I need to work on my transition between scenes)

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:3

Jan 13, 2026

To:Z1661

Do your best💛 Must be challenging to work on two stories at the same time.

True Voice [On Hiatus]

Chapter:2

Jan 13, 2026

To:Z1661

Keep up the good work! Excited to see where you take this story ✨

True Voice [On Hiatus]

Chapter:3

Jan 13, 2026

That was such an immersive story! Your writing is smooth and clear.

Minor nitpick: Use less exclamation marks in the paragraphs, your descriptions are good enough on their own :)

Keep up the good work!

The Silent Blossom

Chapter:1

Jan 13, 2026

It's so sweet!! I have a sugar rush now and it's your fault 😩💖💖

Kinda worried about the professional relationship with Reina thought👀

When RYO Met Neko-chan

Chapter:14