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World record in slow writing, mostly experimenting with my stories.

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registered at: Apr 07, 2025

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Jan 09, 2026

The formatting is good here. Can make the formatting of all chapters like this one?

Exotere

Chapter:3

Jan 09, 2026

Poor boumen hoped for positive news and got the worst 🤣😭

Exotere

Chapter:2

Jan 09, 2026

Really good beginning, your writing is smooth 👍

Minor nitpick: the line where mercella said "I really love mornings" is kinda unfitting since Alice knows her for a long time so mercella didn't need to say that. Maybe you can substitute it with Alice saying "You really like mornings don't you" Or something like that.

Other than that it was a beautiful chapter, keep up the good work!

Exotere

Chapter:1

Jan 08, 2026

This a huge responsibility for poor alisha 😣 Hope she can manage.

Alishia

Chapter:7

Jan 07, 2026

Hisashi is my fashion role model with all the anime merch he wears 😂

It was nice to see kuro spend time with other demons, he was kinda isolated in previous chapters ( except from his butler)
Bystanders misunderstanding the scene was a funny touch too 🤣

THE TALE OF A MODERN DAY DEMON KING

Chapter:10

Jan 07, 2026

Ooo she found out, what would happen next? misunderstanding arc incoming?? :(

When RYO Met Neko-chan

Chapter:11

Jan 07, 2026

I feel like her mother had a lot of secrets

Alishia

Chapter:5

Jan 07, 2026

Poor alisha she got pushed to her breaking point again and again :(

Alishia

Chapter:4

Jan 06, 2026

To:Sammi9519

Take your time! Whenever you feel like it 😊

Keep Away but with Heads

Chapter:2

Jan 05, 2026

They're both crazy I can't 🤣🤣

Wadakoi - A Ridiculous Love That Will Kill Me Someday

Chapter:6

Jan 05, 2026

To:Sammi9519

That combo worked very well 😂

Also I wanted to thank you for your feedback on my novel 😊 It help me improve the chapter and the scene you mentioned.

Keep Away but with Heads

Chapter:2

Jan 05, 2026

Peak chapter title, This was so fun from lecturing prev head in the beginning to ignoring his name to the slam dunk 🤣

Keep Away but with Heads

Chapter:2

Jan 05, 2026

I love that they have shared hobbies and interests, makes their bond feel deep. Their so cute hope nothing bad happens...

When RYO Met Neko-chan

Chapter:10

Jan 04, 2026

That was an intense beginning! Intrigued to know what's gonna happen to poor Alishia :(

Alishia

Chapter:1

Jan 01, 2026

The eyes...that was horrifying

Temptation Behind the Spotlight

Chapter:8

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