Aug 06, 2025

wow. What an ending. Not necessarily the one I wanted, but I liked it. I like the message: Love conquers all.

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Aug 06, 2025

That was cruel not letting us know she survived until the end. I loved it.

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Aug 06, 2025

So she is a caring god.

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Aug 06, 2025

Exciting. I guess that is way with untested technology ( or magic).

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Aug 06, 2025

Si-ri seems awfully calm given the situation. Can we trust her?

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Aug 06, 2025

Oh? Where is she? The Ether? The Astral Plane?

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Aug 06, 2025

No. The suspense is killing me. 😭

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Aug 06, 2025

Not even Si-ri has a plan? Oh, that means trouble. I wonder what they are going to come up with.

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Aug 06, 2025

There is betrayal everywhere. The good and bad do not seem to be easily defined. With that said, I must root for Se-le-ni and Me-la-ni.

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Aug 06, 2025

Hmm. I wonder what made him lose his faith in the Seed.

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Aug 06, 2025

To:Mara

I have two more in the edit phase. Volume 12, one of my favorites, is about half done with editing. So I will start releasing some chapters.

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Aug 06, 2025

I think for the most part she found peace. This was supposed to be the last volume. I tried ending it for the third time, but as always, I wrote two more after this. Thanks fo rnot being too disappointed that I did not reveal what she remembered.

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Aug 06, 2025

To:Mara

Thank you. Do you really think it is the darkest? That is interesting, but I never thought about it in that term.

The decision to not mention what the memory was, didn't come lightly. I struggled with it for quite a bit. In part, I was afraid that it would not come across well. I finally decided that the decision was the most important. I figured that if Tarantino with Pulp Fiction and John Frankenheimer in his film Ronin could write a whole movie about people trying to get a case without ever revealing what is inside, then I could get away without ever revealing it.

I have recorded everything she remembered and her reaction to it in her diary. She decided to record it all in her journal that I told you about. So maybe in the future I could do something with it. Or if overwhelming reader feedback thinks it is important, I can add it somehow. Thank you very much for reading

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Aug 06, 2025

To:Mara

That is a nice coincidence. You and I have had a few discussions on the topic of free choice before too.

I think jess is happy with her decision.

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Aug 06, 2025

To:Mara

That is the thing about choices and free will. We are free to choose, but we have to accept the consequences of that choice whether they or good or bad.

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