Jun 29, 2025

A slow building relationship. I like it. It is how most romances should begin.

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Jun 28, 2025

I get it. Sara came across stronger than that. I guess it is a mask she wore well. Despite what i said, i believe in her. I am just hoping that she learns to separate who she is and what she stands for from what the unicorns did in the past. Her friends need her. Just reading what you wrote, I see a similarity to some of my characters. I am rooting for Sara.

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Jun 28, 2025

No. war is truly hell.

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Jun 28, 2025

I am enjoying your story. I am loving how your characters are created. each of them are believable. Even the dynamic between the friends. You captured the awkwardness between Yuta and Lyra well. You are also setting the scene well.

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Jun 28, 2025

Another chance meeting. it is some type of serendipity.

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Jun 28, 2025

I am feeling sorry for Yuta. But I think he is a little clueless. I am wondering when he will discover the truth.

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Jun 28, 2025

Boyfriend. I am thinking that might just be an excuse.

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Jun 28, 2025

I know I am behind the curve here, but another good chapter. I like cute chance encounters like this.

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Jun 28, 2025

Another good chapter. Not to mimic the other comments, but I was also surprised by the voice change. It is nice, and absolutely works. To be honest, I was thinking the main character was another girl at first. So I was a little surprised from this chapter. I guess it was a little self projection. I am loving it.

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Jun 28, 2025

Another wonderful chapter. This is shaping up to something special.

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Jun 28, 2025

Cat is absolutely right. I am glad to read the new chapter. it had been awhile. I haven’t always agreed with Cat, but she is right, the ”horse” needs to stop wallowing in her self pity.

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Jun 28, 2025

To:Mara

No problem. I enjoyed reading it again. I liked Greta as a character

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Jun 28, 2025

I took me a little bit to recognize that I read this before. Then I half expected Miriam to knock on the door. It was fun to see it as a stand alone.

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Jun 28, 2025

OK. This is a cute story. This is not my usual first choice of genres, but the story is set up so well, I am hooked.

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Jun 28, 2025

To:Mara

Not too far off.

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