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Sep 16, 2025
To:Mara
Thank you. I struggled with that ending, but it felt right.
That was a nice gift. I stil can’t believe that Eri isn’t going with him.
I apologize for making this too short. The story may not be long enough for the contest, but it is complete, and I am happy with it. Thank you everyone who took the time to read it.
I love that you let the characters have redemption. The whole conversation about the role of sin in people’s lives was deep and moving.
The tears are real. I know that the scene is nothing like it, but for some reason Shakespeare’s Henry V came to mind.
Sep 15, 2025
A short chapter. was able to finish while waiting for the bus. Rina is a wonderful character. I like how she looks at Aki and Chaya and thinks of her relationship with Selene. 🥰
So some of the game mechanics still exist in this world. And the game takes over her dialogue sometimes. Interesting
Hmm. Who are they indeed.
Ok. How old is Haruko supposed to be?
This is a cute little story I like your use of internal dialogue. I look forward to reading the rest.
Interesting premise.
You warned me. That was not the outcome I expected. 😭
Wow. They are parading her around like she is a rockstar on a world tour.
That is the question, isn’t it. Only she can answer that. Traditionaly, that is the problem with faith. No matter what you believe.
Renold isn’t holding back. But that would be a big change for our hero to learn the difference between someone leaving and someone being pushed away.