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Jul 01, 2025

Another good chapter. It all reminding me of the fox in The Little Prince. Pretty soon they will have tamed each other.

Your Kindness Tastes Like Spring

Chapter:5

Jul 01, 2025

Those were a quick three chapters. I am enjoying this, your writing style has drawn me in. I am excited to see how this relationship, for lack of a better word, between the protagonist who is openly trying not to fit in and his deskmate who is pretending to fit in developes. I hope I characterized them correctly. I am also curious about your choice to use song titles for your chapter names. I am looking forward to reading your future chapters.

The Fourth Month Of The Spring

Chapter:3

Jul 01, 2025

What a day.

The Fourth Month Of The Spring

Chapter:1

Jul 01, 2025

To:Mara

1984? I definitely see the connection. I wasn't consciously thinking about that when I wrote it, but it works. That is the concept that I was going with. Part of the never ending cold war vibe.

Dominion Protocol Volume 9: Dead Hand

Chapter:7

Jun 30, 2025

To:Napryzon

Thanks for sharing. I would have guessed music is what you studied. I only asked because I struggled through my engineering degree, but always walked the line between it and music. Your research paid off.

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:30

Jun 30, 2025

Finally. They are happy tears now. You are covering this well. I can feel the romance bloom slowly and organically. On another note, do you have an engineering or music background?

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:30

Jun 30, 2025

where do I start. First, I think I was as dense as Yuta in the previous chapter. I now understand that Lyra was referring to Emi, when she said falling in love was off limits. I am glad that he was able to begin to clear his conscience. This chapter has made me reflect on some of my past relationships. I think that is a sign of good writing. I loved the characters you created, but this chapter has made them relatable.

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:29

Jun 30, 2025

”Falling in love is off limits ” That came out of nowhere. You cought the gentle awkwardness of two people who are either unaware of their feelings or not willing to acknowledge them.

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:28

Jun 30, 2025

This played out perfectly. Yuta is clueless. I really like how you used the Emi situation to foreshadow and set up this scene. For me it amplified the emotions.

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:26

Jun 30, 2025

Oh no. Yuta really has a case of foot in mouth. How is he going to pull this off. and he is going to have to owe his friends a big favor

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:24

Jun 30, 2025

That was mean of ray to bring thatvup in that way. Poor Yuta had enough on his plate without having to second guess past decisions. But, I understand. We have all made choices like that, and life rarely gives us do overs. You captured the moment well. I have been crying since they were at the hot springs. 😭

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:23

Jun 30, 2025

poor Yuta. He has been getting a strong lesson on the ways of love. I think he overanalizes things

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:22

Jun 30, 2025

It gets better and better. Great job at capturing the moment.

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:19

Jun 30, 2025

the tension was high in there. Ayame fishing for the gossip. things could have gone a lot worse. I like the way your characters interact. I mentioned it before, but this is a believable friend group.

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:18

Jun 30, 2025

Those two questions are pure evil. 😧I don’t know how he is going to get out of this one.

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:17

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