Dec 28, 2025
What a perfect, cozy, heart-swelling chapter. 😭
This is exactly the quiet morning and shared joy I was hoping for after all the drama. Waking up to Fali making pancakes? The easy, silly banter about "the haps"? My heart is so full. You can just feel the domestic comfort settling over them like a warm blanket.
Then the flying scene. This was everything.
Fali being all capable and mechanical, doing his checks with that "quiet precision" – peak attractiveness, honestly. <3
The way you described the plane, Freyla II, made it feel like a character itself.
I could see it so clearly. You were not kidding when you said planes are your speciality.
And Mele's reaction was just perfect. She's not in love with flying (yet)..
she's in love with watching him flying.
“The pure love he had for something he’d never truly left behind.”
THAT LINE. It says everything about why she's there and what she sees in him.
It's not about the adventure for her; it's about seeing him whole, happy, and in his element.
The image of him with the biggest grin she's ever seen as the engine roars to life? I MELTED. This is the Fali we (and Mele) have been waiting to see, free, joyful, and doing what he loves.
You've taken the "hiding from the world" plot and turned it into something so beautifully character-driven. They're building a little world where they can be their true selves. Him as a pilot, her as... well, someone who isn't "The Reaper's Songstress" for a few hours.
I am so invested in this peaceful, two-person universe they're creating. More of this, please! 🙏
