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I'm a guy, btw.
I love parody and anything that sounds funny. But being ghosted isn't one of them.
Just kidding, lmao.

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Jul 14, 2022

To:Harmonica Writes

Oh you can catch up on mine whenever, and if you do (at least up to chapter 10), um, please give me your feedback: is it still funny? Do I cover the plot holes? Is my grammar improved? And other things you have in mind. Because your feedback was really helping me, for example, I focused on absurdity/comedy in some chapters, and I got positive comments (so it was good to focus on it), so I’m very grateful to you!

Thanks for updating, I enjoyed your writing, and things got me interested, so yeah, I kept reading when I had free time.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:68

Jul 13, 2022

Alright, time to study (and catch up on some novels during the break time, lol). I hope I don't have to study a lot for this exam.

Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:14

Jul 13, 2022

To:Hungry Sheep

Yeah, it looks more serious after I read it again this time, thank you for pointed it out, desuwa! I hope I can keep this tone in the next chapter.

Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:13

Jul 12, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thanks for reading, Tomo!

Yeah, when it convinces them, then it's rational (although when we think about it, it's probably dumb). So you can say that they sometimes argue over something dumb, lol.

I think it's just my anxiety. After I texted someone, posted something, or reacted to something, sometimes I was afraid I offended them, plus, I have negative thoughts all the time, as my close friend noticed, so I thought let's just apologize beforehand or delete something that later I assume it's bad. So thank you, your reply really relieved me that nothing is wrong. Yeah, I prefer to communicate in real life, because there is no anxiety!

Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:13

Jul 12, 2022

I post early because I have an exam this week. I probably post the next chapter next week. Well, I'm not sure.

Like the first arc, the shitstorm will be in the fifth chapter (in this case, chapter 15, or probably chapter 16), so the next few chapters are the calm before the storm (not many actions).
I hope you can still enjoy this novel, and please forgive me if I said something wrong or stupid.

Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:13

Jul 11, 2022

"snooping someone else's house", "oh why then, were you scratching your butt" lol
Oh I like the end, it surprised me. So what lie is Evan gonna pull next time.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:72

Jul 10, 2022

ah, Evan is a swindler! Swindler no Jutsu story!
"be damn good at barking" I love this line.
Oh, another interesting thing: disciples.
Evan is a PAPA. Then who is the mama?!! I actually want to be glared at sometimes, because it's sweet when someone you love is jealous: a sign that you are loved, I think.
pale? The woman is the puppet of the disciple. Now it's time to fight! Or Evan will claim, "I'm the illegitimate son of Lord Evan! Now tell me everything!"
I wonder why nobody notices Sereya. Evan changed his hair color, but Sereya?

I catch up. Well, just Volume 3. But, will I get a "chu" reply? Just kidding.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:71

Jul 10, 2022

Sereya is short?! 150 cm? Great.
Uh, another unprotective holding hand!
"I didn't say stop" wait, what? HOLY.
Oh, so the rank isn't A or E, but Goblin and such, interesting.
Evan is weak, but he has a sneaking skill?

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:70

Jul 10, 2022

"morbid curiosity"? morbin!
"my embarrassing stories" what kind of embarrassing stories, Evan, did you often morbin? Did you ask a "chu" to the baron's daughter but get embarrassed?!
No Eveline because she is a tsundere. The founder of Evanism doesn't like a tsundere, so they don't want to worship her and be a simp for her. Or they don't want Eveline to do something funny (morbin) as the sister of the hero.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:69

Jul 09, 2022

"Heeey! It's you!" right, that's why I like Lovecraft. CHAOS!
"he said I'm an idiot!" why she seems happy about it, lol.
Ren is pretty smart and makes things interesting!

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:2

Jul 09, 2022

"My words are absolute, my calculations are unchangeable." Oh I love this line.
Interesting premise, and I wonder what is Adam going to do.

An Eden from the Ashes

Chapter:0

Jul 09, 2022

"Some were interested in large breasts" um, what about both sizes?
This is a good (or poetic?) depiction of "meet God" event in isekai. I mean, usually it's "Aqua" moment or other kinds.

"...So what the fuck do you want from me?" I love this one line to God. Yeah I think an interesting narrator usually gets me hooked.
It seems that you grind this novel, desuwa? I mean, it is updated everyday?

I Am the Greatest

Chapter:2

Jul 09, 2022

"A Hero always needs a little bit of mystery." what a chuuni, lol.
I think this one has a nice narration of sadness. I mean, I failed to make a sad scene or at least a touching one, so this is good!

"Am I not the world to you?" Sweet! Let's uh, proceed to the next step!
"in front of the stables" lol

"Just...who did all this?" this gets me hooked. I mean, I love mystery (I had no idea about the appeal of a romance novel), before I was reading because I was curious about the consequences and Evan's narration was entertaining, now I get another interesting thing!

Volume 1's hook for me so far: "how Sereya switches her love" and "if Evan is so weak, then how does he fight a strong enemy? Hanasuke can repel a star!". But I need to catch up first

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:68

Jul 09, 2022

To:Deleted User

Yeah in anime, I think whenever the MC is deducing, there is certain BGM, so I thought "I need it too!" lol.
Thanks for reading, Tomo!

Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:12

Jul 08, 2022

To:Makech

Right, lolol

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:1

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