Aug 06, 2023
The prospect sounds interesting, but it worries me from an admin point of view but I am here as a reader so intrusive thoughts begone!
I found the story a bit jarring at a certain point. The narrative changes abruptly from the start to around the middle. As I saw Kaze mention, it does feel disjointed. Very simple at the start and then the deeper narrative kicks in being a striking contrast.
Nonetheless, the idea sounds fun and I'm wondering (and ngl, worried too) how it's gonna be executed since a "choose your path" narrative is no easy feat.
Good luck!