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Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.
You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!
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Aug 09, 2023
To:Bubbles
Apparently, everyone is getting confused when it comes to who's a demon a who's an angel, hopefully, the next chapter will make things clearer. And yes, I 100% agree with what you said, I need to pick up the pace of not writing since the last contest ahaha ; v;
To:K-J-Whitten
Thank you K.J!!!!
Aug 07, 2023
To:Alyssa Aurinia
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AAAAAAAAAAAAAA ;;;;;;;;;;;;
To:Kitsune
Oh, the adventurer/mage is not a gentleman! That's why I used specific pronouns 👀 (which in turn can make things confusing). The mage is pretty quiet, which is why they don't talk very often and are inside their own little mind.,unless something irks them or they want a specific answer. That's why the dialogue truly starts when our mysterious individual meets the character that appears at the end ; v;
Thanks for reading!
I'll admit it's a bit confusing. It's not the dialogue, but the pace feels very... rough around the edges? A happened and now B, so we end with C. This is only the prologue so I'm sure it will get better ; v;!
In all true honesty, I'm not into this genre of stories because I try my best to understand them but I simply cannot get a feel for them, but I'll do my best here since I can feel the passion behind those written words.
Alright, this chapter has more substance to it. It's shaping to be good :)
Hm... interesting premise. Good writing, the pacing is a bit rushed on some edges but we're all in a learning process. Time to read the next chapter!
As long as no Emperor Penguins are used as a special skill in this football game, I'm in. Say no to Emperor Penguin's abuse. All in all, solid chapter.
To:lolitroy
Yes...?
The inner turmoil could be felt with the writing language. I felt like drowning alongside Haru in his world devoid of colour. That was a really nice touch, of transmitting such strong emotions without outright spelling them and just feel them with the prose!
To:kazesenken
That's one of the whiplashes I was aiming for so I'm pretty happy I delivered. And sure, go ahead to think of Ar Tonelico, makes me happy as well, great games with banger OSTs. I'll reveal why I chose that name too, so it's not only for fanservice sake.
Thank you for reading!!
To:Shulox
But is it a coup if the one "coup"'ed wants to coup even when his own city doesn't know he was coup'ed? Thinking emoji.
Yes, since fairies are the embodiment of nature they can just, get all excited and go all out and just go kaboom, and be reborn without even noticing. The lore of touhou fairies inspired me for that ; v;
Thank you so much for the comment!
To:Pernodi
Yeah, it was hard to find another way of referring to the mage of Tonelico when writing in third person. I apologise for the confusion it brought upon this chapter.
CHANCE ENCOUNTER TIME!!!!
