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Aug 13, 2023

His curse is pedantry, I cracked the case.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:28

Aug 13, 2023

The Witch of Caerleon and the Villainess of Caerleon, together at last.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:27

Aug 13, 2023

In the midst of all the hubbub, I think it's rare to appreciate a rare moment of levity, as posed here. And when said moment remains both coherent and forward to the plot, it can only be described as masterful. Kudos.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:26

Aug 13, 2023

The pacing of this chapter is hoo boy. I'm sweating reading through it and I love it. And now, at the end, all I can hear is the faint echoes of Charlie Puth singing Fast and Furious.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:25

Aug 13, 2023

Unexpected. I am sickened. But curious.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:24

Aug 13, 2023

God, John is so fucking based. Mmmm, I'll kiss him if Eleanor wouldn't scorn me right after.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:23

Aug 13, 2023

Trans rep. Nuff said. Heart react no. 3.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:22

Aug 13, 2023

Kith,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:21

Aug 13, 2023

Hmmmmmm, not sure what to make of Kyle's attitude there. Nor Vivian's. But we'll see.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:20

Aug 13, 2023

Funny how Diane dodges Kyle's question at the first line, then literally never addresses it until the very end. Girlboss queen, keep it up.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:19

Aug 13, 2023

Part of me wonders if some of your chapters wouldn't benefit from different endings. Looking at my admin board, I can see none of your chapters ever stray from the 1.5k mark too much, with 1.8k on the 3rd being the largest difference. But still, I feel like in pursuit for this consistency, you have sacrificed a certain punch to the chapters. Like here, for example, the way this chapter plays out, a stressful foray into the crumbling castle, is very alert and dynamic. But the ending attempts to create a juxtaposition from that, contrasting the minuscule and quiet nature of the carriage with the 'butchering' of the capital. Only instead of it feeling like a drop at the end, it sorta feels like a plateau. Probably switching up the climactic element towards the tail end, aka. Diane saving Vivian, would address that, but eh. Is what is.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:18

Aug 13, 2023

Y'know, sometimes I think you're slipping away from first person perspective into third limited. Some details and the way they're presented would be a little hard to attribute to a mere exterior observer, unless Kyle had access to Vivian's psyche somehow. Pair that with Kyle's reasonably detached narrative style, seldom interspaced with stronger display of personality and the immersion is a little broken at times.

That being said, the moment was cute. I enjoyed the little kaomoji, then the literal belltower cucking him. Very sweet, much love. Heart react no. 2.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:17

Aug 13, 2023

Diane out here more diligent than a Korean mother trying to wed her pushing 30s daughter.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:16

Aug 12, 2023

This was pretty masterful.

From the clever way the loss of self was purported in the beginning, prompting the silent question of whether Vivian is the summation of the stat choices Kyle surreptitiously imposes on her, or rather she is herself despite those, to the quick-witted dialogue that fills a nighttime's worth of events succinctly, without ever feeling rushed. All behind the philosophical ramifications of Kyle's psyche bleeding into the narration, for once, more poignantly than ever.

Well written, friend, I retract my earlier critiques. To that end, I shall finish my reading sprint here and resume tomorrow. And to you, a love react. The first willingly given across my tenure as a contest peruser.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:15

Aug 12, 2023

Vivian just chose the Blunt Seductress build. But with Kyle at the reins, we may certainly think that he's just projecting. Muppet.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:14

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