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aaa

Aug 02, 2023

Damn, this bitch ain't shutting up about railway this railway that why doesn't she just get railed by the train?

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:8

Aug 02, 2023

Until then, so long.

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:7

Aug 01, 2023

I so want him to call her 'Just Chika' now. Anyway, sweet chapter Steward. The leads are very cute quirked-up white boy-and-girl. If I had one comment, I'd say that you overuse summarisation and explanation as facile ways of keeping the pace. They're fine, in moderation, but I often find myself wondering if a lot of the things Thelian informs us about in his inner monologue couldn't be deduced more organically through dialogue or revealed in passing later on, without the requirement of his introspection.

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:4

Jul 26, 2023

Pretty funny how your opus went from Gentleman of the Apocalypse to the Playboy of UniverCity

Annika Says No!

Chapter:2

Jul 26, 2023

taller than him? MOMMY ALERT MOMMY ALERT

Annika Says No!

Chapter:1

Jul 26, 2023

fucking half-breed gay reeeeeeeeeeee

A Tale of A Thousand Miles

Chapter:3

Jul 26, 2023

I, too, have nightmares of binomial expansions.

A Tale of A Thousand Miles

Chapter:2

Jul 26, 2023

that stupid cunt on god

A Tale of A Thousand Miles

Chapter:1

Jul 26, 2023

That chimeric beast is actually called a hippogriff.

A Tale of A Thousand Miles

Chapter:0

Jul 18, 2023

This is actually pretty lovely. Amber's secretive nature being revealed to be more-or-less an overt show of modesty is a very intriguing choice and the way the scenes play out is very well-thought out, as evidenced by the organic flow.

If I were to have one note, I think the beginning is a little lacklustre. The awe of the performance is a bit mitigated by how you jump back and forth between setting the scene and commenting on the vibe – doubly so when you seem to be rehashing some of the vibe-beats a couple of times.

Irrespective of that, I feel like this is very well-written. From the way it builds on Finch's quirks from the previous chapter to Mercy's larger than life personality, from Amber's neatly suppressed nerves to Mitsu's whole 'fuck it we ball vibe'. Splendid job, well done.

Telling the Bees

Chapter:7

Jul 18, 2023

Get that booty, Mr Bootyside.

Telling the Bees

Chapter:6

Jul 18, 2023

Sweet, sweet daddy caroline.

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:17

Jul 18, 2023

Gay hoes.

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:16

Jul 18, 2023

B-toes.

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:15

Jul 18, 2023

Damn, wheelchair representation and dreamboat best friend character? Sign me the fuck up

Watch Over You

Chapter:1

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