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Jun 04, 2022

Hi there!

I've noticed you signed up your novel for the MAL x HF contest, but you haven't selected any of the appropriate genres. Please add cyberpunk, romance & comedy or school in order to be eligible.

Thanks,

Bubbles.

2099 Awakening

Chapter:1

Jun 04, 2022

Hi there!

I've noticed you signed up your novel for the MAL x HF contest, but you haven't selected any of the appropriate genres. Please add cyberpunk, romance & comedy or school in order to be eligible.

Thanks,

Bubbles.

Strikers

Chapter:0

Jun 04, 2022

Hi there!

I've noticed you signed up your novel for the MAL x HF contest, but you haven't selected any of the appropriate genres. Please add cyberpunk, romance & comedy or school in order to be eligible.

Thanks,

Bubbles.

Level Ranker

Chapter:0

Jun 04, 2022

Hi there!

I've noticed you signed up your novel for the MAL x HF contest, but you haven't selected any of the appropriate genres. Please add cyberpunk, romance & comedy or school in order to be eligible.

Thanks,

Bubbles.

The Split World/Supurittowārudo

Chapter:0

Jun 04, 2022

Hi there!

I've noticed you signed up your novel for the MAL x HF contest, but you haven't selected an appropriate genre combination. You've selected Romance, but not Comedy. Please add Comedy to be eligible.

Thanks,

Bubbles.

I wanted to be greedy in my next life, but become national hero instead

Chapter:0

Jun 04, 2022

Hi there!

I've noticed you signed up your novel for the MAL x HF contest, but you haven't selected any of the appropriate genres. Please add cyberpunk, romance & comedy or school in order to be eligible.

Thanks,

Bubbles.

The Paperclip Factory

Chapter:0

Jun 04, 2022

Hi there!

I've noticed you signed up your novel for the MAL x HF contest, but you haven't selected any of the appropriate genres. Please add cyberpunk, romance & comedy or school in order to be eligible.

Thanks,

Bubbles.

"Wuste waits for no man"- Discovering Utopia

Chapter:0

Jun 04, 2022

Hi there!

I've noticed you've signed up your novel to the MAL x HF writing contest, but you didn't properly select your genres. You have the 'romance' genre all right, but you need both romance and comedy in order to be eligible. Please amend your genre selection in order to be eligible.

Thanks,

Bubbles.

Romance of the Three Metal Angels

Chapter:1

Jun 04, 2022

Hi there!

I've noticed you have the 'comedy' genre selected, but not romance. In order to be eligible your entry must have either the cyberpunk genre, romance AND comedy or school. Please add the romance genre to your novel so that it could be eligible.

Thanks,

Bubbles.

Ane And His Seames

Chapter:0

Jun 04, 2022

Hi there!

I've noticed you've signed up your novel to the MAL x HF writing contest, but you haven't picked any of the required genres to be eligible. Please add cyberpunk, romance & comedy or school to your genres in order to properly sign up for a prompt.

Thanks,

Bubbles.

A Place between There and Now

Chapter:1

Jun 04, 2022

Triple dog deal isekai

Third and Final Time

Chapter:0

Jun 04, 2022

I think this is quite a step-up from the previous chapter where the narrative voice slipped up quite a lot for my liking. You have a very interesting story to tell, so I'm looking forward to see where this leads, especially with the metafiction aspect you want to play with.

Good luck.

Bubbles, out.

FICTION: If you held the power of god in your two hands, would you save the world? Would you doom it? Or would you watch from the sidelines, just as you had done before?

Chapter:2

Jun 04, 2022

Cyberpunk Rom-Com woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

What Lies Beneath the Surface

Chapter:1

Jun 04, 2022

The fact you used sniffed as a speech tag gave me PearlTSD.

Of Friends and Foam Cores

Chapter:1

Jun 04, 2022

Interesting aesthetics, but I think you're so deadlocked on exposing every aspect of Fides in such an explicit manner that I really can't get behind most of what's being said. The dialogue also feels so pointed all the time. Without any 'fat' so to speak, there's little I can rest on when I'm reading this. The characters just feel like tools for the plot rather than humans, so yeah...

Bubbles, out.

Infallibility

Chapter:2

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