Jan 21, 2026
To:Z1661
Thank you for the comment and advice! I love that idea of sound versus wind! 👀 You're entirely correct that this fight is very short - I was trying to save time by not expanding it too much. But now that the deadline has passed, I might rewrite scenes completely. I actually wanted to add more magic to this! And I am also aware that tanuki employ not only their bellies but two more -ahem- assets frequently which I should mention more xD
Yuame has never been in a fight in his life, and thus he completely froze up. But he may have done something without him knowing it yet 👀
And the tengu did not quite give up - Kaoru just managed to lure him away from Yuame first, and their fight continued out of sight while Yuame fled. Should clarify that a bit more 😅 thanks again!!