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Crys Meer

Exophonic writer living in Tokyo.
Writes and enjoys:
Urban Fantasy / Historical Fiction / NSFW / Music / Drama / Slice of Life

Would love to exchange honest feedback!

registered at: Oct 22, 2025

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Jan 01, 2026

To:kcayu

Thank you so much! I’m glad they sounded fun, I wanted to write these actors as a bit chaotic and blunt but clearly good friends.

And yeah Kaoru… He knew that if he’d tell Yuame right away that he would probably refuse to come at all XD and he’s also still quite selfish. This place might suit him perfectly but how will Yuame fare? Let’s find out.

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:12

Jan 01, 2026

To:Liz

Thank you Liz! Happy new year! <3

Yes... Did Yuame's eyes deceive him? Or did he imagine it all? Stay tuned...

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:11

Dec 31, 2025

To:Literate_Manul

Happy new year, Manul! May it be full of blessings for you. I am so happy you started reading my story!

Thank you so much and I see what you mean! I actually wrote the first three chapters of this as a stand alone prologue long ago, before I decided to write Kaoru and Yuame's full story for this contest. Some more people commented that it is a little hard to understand, so I will definitely consider this for edits. You're not alone!

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:4

Dec 31, 2025

To:Literate_Manul

Haha thank you! Yes, Kaoru needed a scolding and his new companion sees through his BS (At least he did here).

Yes, this story all takes place in the human world, where youkai and other supernatural beings live among humans. Humans are mostly unaware of this…

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:3

Dec 31, 2025

To:Literate_Manul

Yes! Tanuki notoriously enjoy taking human forms to prank them, and Kaoru is no different. :)

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:1

Dec 31, 2025

To:Literate_Manul

Thank you very much, Manul! I’m glad you think so!

Poor Kaoru, only getting called Lord Tanuki sarcastically by a sassy ghost 🥹

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:1

Dec 31, 2025

To:Tamuna Tsertsvadze

Hey he’s a soft boy 👉👈 XD I think he forgets how scary he used to be lol

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:11

Dec 31, 2025

To:Tamuna Tsertsvadze

Fair enough! It’s true I don’t know how to write light novels XD

I Will Arrest the Yōkai that Killed My Parents

Chapter:20

Dec 31, 2025

Your unhinged chapter titles strike again

This was another proper mystery solving chapter! My brain just might not be capable of keeping up, but if I read this all again slowly, I might get it

Hoshino's one purpose of looking cool in front of Hazama is very obvious, heh.

En Egui Exorcist

Chapter:16

Dec 31, 2025

To:Prufrock

I very much enjoy this story as a fellow performer <3 Sayane is so cute, she truly has all the makings of an idol who you can't help but love. The music industry failed her, but she was born to be an idol.

I will be looking back at these chapters with the song list you gave me, and I am excited to read more!

I Died As a JPop Idol and Now I'm a Revolutionary Songstress

Chapter:18

Dec 31, 2025

To:Prufrock

oh yes, don't we all...

Destroyers: Your Touch or Oblivion

Chapter:45

Dec 31, 2025

To:Prufrock

YOU LIKE DIR TOO?! Man I'm so glad we are friends.

Destroyers: Your Touch or Oblivion

Chapter:43

Dec 31, 2025

To:Tamuna Tsertsvadze

Thank you, I'm glad you thought so!

Indeed, all kinds of monsters appear in Asakusa at night... but are they human or supernatural?

Ash and Silk ~灰と絹~

Chapter:11

Dec 31, 2025

To:Tamuna Tsertsvadze

Ohhh 👀 okay, that is pretty shocking!

But allow me to make an observation about your work; you have a lot of characters (especially in this scene) and you also switch POV between them a lot. Sometimes that works fine, but other times it goes into Telling again rather than Showing. I felt like in this chapter in particular, the POV switching to Kasane just for that detail about Yumi felt a little confusing. I'd sooner accept Kazuya telling Kasane and her looking deeply shocked, but keeping the detail and reveal about Yumi for the next chapter where the situation can be properly explained?

I Will Arrest the Yōkai that Killed My Parents

Chapter:20

Dec 30, 2025

Looove!! That moment before heading on stage, the anticipation, you described it so well.

I admit I too perform because I am enjoying it - but doing it purely for others must be a huge thrill.

Attis and Azag are simply the best crew. I'm so happy for Sayane.

I Died As a JPop Idol and Now I'm a Revolutionary Songstress

Chapter:18

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