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Jul 15, 2021
Another great chapter! I like how deep into the lore you're getting. You're very knowledgeable on the subject, and the reader can tell when you've done your research!
I'm excited to see a story based on Norse mythology! Keep up the good work:)
Ooh mysterious ending! I like the rhyming too:)
Jul 14, 2021
As a lifeguard, I can say expectations truly do not match reality😂 And anyone who starts a sentence with "alas" is definitely trustworthy, haha!
I like how you broke up the chapter like that with the asterisks--it keeps the pace nice. I also enjoy your writing style and look forward to reading more!
Another good chap!😆
I really like the story you're forming here! It has a lot of potential:) The only thing I would critique would be a few mistypes, but otherwise it's a great first chapter! The premise really drew me in.