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Taylor Victoria

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I like to read and write. I also like cats.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Jul 25, 2021

Ahh where is it?? Lol

Luvio

Chapter:0

Jul 25, 2021

Interesting start! Wondering where this will lead to, but I’m liking the secretiveness!

Yui

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2021

Lol so it looks like he's gonna die. But I like the story so far! It's also interesting how the protagonist already knows what an isekai is, so that makes it more ironic he's a serfxD

I Keep Dying In This Fantasy World But My New BFF is a Necromancer So It's Fine I Guess

Chapter:0

Jul 25, 2021

Interesting prologue! It makes me intrigued:) I did notice one spelling error in the first paragraph where you wrote "comes true" instead of "come true." Simple typo! And if you make this change, it'll be "burn to ashes."

nono existen dead

Chapter:0

Jul 24, 2021

D-Disposed?! Wow, so the adults are vegetables... that explains a lot. Looking forward to reading more! This was a great chapter, but a few times the tenses were mixed up:0 If this is something you have a hard time with, I usually read through my chapter a time or two to double check my past tense:)

Lou

Chapter:2

Jul 23, 2021

To:Ethan_07

Haha, thanks! It was unintentional, but I hope that makes her more realistic:))

Pixie

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2021

Your descriptions are good, but you do have a lot of run-on sentences! I could visualize what you were saying though!

The woods

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2021

Wondering where this'll go! I like your descriptions so far:)

Can you hear the sea?

Chapter:1

Jul 19, 2021

This is seriously getting so good! I'm genuinely invested. Also, why are the adults such a-holes?? Agh! I hate it when adults in stories aren't reliable lol! But that just means you're depicting them well haha. Can't wait to read more!

Lou

Chapter:1

Jul 19, 2021

To:JUNIT_

I'm glad you think so! I'm trying to expand on her world a bit and give more examples of just how large our world is to someone her size:)

Pixie

Chapter:3

Jul 18, 2021

Shithead hero, hahaha! This looks like it's gonna be really fun! I like that it's told from the "bad guy" perspective while also humanizing them. Keep up the good work!

Demon Lord's Isekai Vacation

Chapter:0

Jul 18, 2021

Well the reaper seems like a nice fellow...lol. Anyway, this is a good direction! Hopefully he succeeds in saving five people😳

Second Chances

Chapter:1

Jul 18, 2021

Nice start! Kinda ominous(?) Wondering what'll happen next!

Second Chances

Chapter:0

Jul 18, 2021

I like where this story is going! So far it reminds me of a funnier version of Death Note haha. Keep up the good work!

There's a Demon in my Basement!

Chapter:1

Jul 18, 2021

I'm in love with your writing! You definitely having your own style--I'm excited to read more!

There's a Demon in my Basement!

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