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Taylor Victoria

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I like to read and write. I also like cats.

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Jul 21, 2021

Wondering where this'll go! I like your descriptions so far:)

Can you hear the sea?

Chapter:1

Jul 19, 2021

This is seriously getting so good! I'm genuinely invested. Also, why are the adults such a-holes?? Agh! I hate it when adults in stories aren't reliable lol! But that just means you're depicting them well haha. Can't wait to read more!

Lou

Chapter:1

Jul 19, 2021

To:JUNIT_

I'm glad you think so! I'm trying to expand on her world a bit and give more examples of just how large our world is to someone her size:)

Pixie

Chapter:3

Jul 18, 2021

Shithead hero, hahaha! This looks like it's gonna be really fun! I like that it's told from the "bad guy" perspective while also humanizing them. Keep up the good work!

Demon Lord's Isekai Vacation

Chapter:0

Jul 18, 2021

Well the reaper seems like a nice fellow...lol. Anyway, this is a good direction! Hopefully he succeeds in saving five people😳

Second Chances

Chapter:1

Jul 18, 2021

Nice start! Kinda ominous(?) Wondering what'll happen next!

Second Chances

Chapter:0

Jul 18, 2021

I like where this story is going! So far it reminds me of a funnier version of Death Note haha. Keep up the good work!

There's a Demon in my Basement!

Chapter:1

Jul 18, 2021

I'm in love with your writing! You definitely having your own style--I'm excited to read more!

There's a Demon in my Basement!

Chapter:0

Jul 18, 2021

They literally kidnapped this boy haha! Wondering how the beaver plan is going to go, but I'm sure it'll be hilarious!

The Lonely Lovers Club

Chapter:2

Jul 18, 2021

To:FADEX

Thanks for reading! I'm working on the next chapter, but I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! I'm sure she wished she had her knife too haha

Pixie

Chapter:2

Jul 18, 2021

To:FADEX

Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm really happy you think her voice is upbeat:) I'll try to keep the story interesting as I reveal all that's going on!

Pixie

Chapter:1

Jul 15, 2021

To:JUNIT_

I really appreciate your constructive criticism! I was going to explain later on about how she's a pixie, but I can understand how not stating it in the first chapter could be confusing. I was hoping I could convey it without saying it outright, but perhaps I should be a bit more blunt.
As for the emptiness of the castle, I'm planning on building from that, but I appreciate you drawing attention to it. Now I know what "holes" in my story need work on:)

Pixie

Chapter:1

Jul 15, 2021

Woah this is kind of weird. So they're in some sort of strange facility? Hmmm... looking forward to seeing where this goes! Like, I need my questions answered. My only critique would be how you sometimes mix up the past and present tense, but that's a quick fix:)

Lou

Chapter:0

Jul 15, 2021

Another great chapter! I like how deep into the lore you're getting. You're very knowledgeable on the subject, and the reader can tell when you've done your research!

Ragnarok: The Day After

Chapter:1

Jul 15, 2021

I'm excited to see a story based on Norse mythology! Keep up the good work:)

Ragnarok: The Day After

Chapter:0

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