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Taylor Victoria

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I like to read and write. I also like cats.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Aug 08, 2021

Your grammar could use some work, but you have an interesting premise. This looks like it’ll be a sci-fi/dystopia maybe? Seriously keep writing because you’ll just improve from here.

Arora- the wish I once had upon a star

Chapter:0

Aug 08, 2021

Wow this is so tragic yet I couldn’t stop reading lol. Ugh trashy parents are the worst. My dude needs to hang on till he’s eighteen. Totally thought he got hit by the isekai bus at first!

Faulty Defectives

Chapter:1

Aug 08, 2021

I came for the war unicorns and was not disappointed✌️

PowerPlay! ~ The odd tale about awesome powers, quirky personalities and why they make for an awful mix.

Chapter:0

Aug 07, 2021

To:Briar Rhodes

I'm so happy you're enjoying it! There's some more psychology coming up in my later chapters than I originally intended, so hopefully it comes off well!

Pixie

Chapter:2

Aug 04, 2021

Ah no! His arm! This was well-written, keep it up:)

The Wind Calls the Flowers

Chapter:0

Aug 04, 2021

To:Briar Rhodes

Thanks so much for your feedback! I was worried the descriptions would make it too ~wordy, but you make me feel much better! I really hope you continue to enjoy their story;)

Pixie

Chapter:1

Aug 04, 2021

To:FADEX

Oh nooooo! Lmao, I'm so not good with torture scenes and that definitely sounds like it'd be in one!xD

Pixie

Chapter:2

Aug 04, 2021

Heyo! This chapter is a bit short and all over the place because I've had finals this week... ugh. But now that I'm through that particular hell, the quality should be a bit better next chapter! Please stay around to find out what happens with these characters:)

Pixie

Chapter:8

Aug 03, 2021

Yay, expanding the world! I like that we're getting more background info now, and especially that they're college students! Not everyone wants to read about high school, lol. Keep it up:D

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Chapter:2

Aug 03, 2021

To:Yuki Anon

Ouch! Comparing it to a needle is a good idea! I don't want to copy Game of Thrones or anything, but perhaps I'll make the comparison😆 Thanks for the feedback! Annoyed quips are really fun for me to write, so I hope I don't make too many of them haha!

Pixie

Chapter:2

Aug 01, 2021

The chemistry between these characters is great! Wondering if this'll be a friends-to-something-more trope, but I'm not complaining!😂 Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Chapter:1

Aug 01, 2021

To:Yuki Anon

Wow, thank you for such an in-depth comment:) I really appreciate you explaining what you enjoyed; it makes me eager to write more! This novel is loosely based on Tinkerbell and Peter Pan, actually, but it's definitely not a retelling or anything like that. I'm so happy you noticed the similarities!

If you decide to keep reading, I hope you continue to enjoy these characters and the story❤️

Pixie

Chapter:1

Jul 31, 2021

To:Bentknee

Thanks so much for your input! I very much appreciate it:) I don’t identify the MC as a pixie in the first chap because I wanted to make the reader wonder for a short while, but this is soon cleared up in the following chapters! Again, I appreciate the comment^^

Pixie

Chapter:1

Jul 31, 2021

There is a bit of clunkiness, but I overall enjoyed your first chapter! I would do a quick revise and fix some grammar mistakes, but otherwise I liked it:) The protagonist is a bit sly hehe~

The adventure of Omni and Liliana

Chapter:1

Jul 31, 2021

The way you write is very interesting. Like, instead of reading normally, my eyes are flicking across the screen as if I were reading a manga? Lol, anyway, it's good.

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Chapter:1

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