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I like to read and write. I also like cats.
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Aug 11, 2021
If only getting a doctor's note were that easy... lol, nice chapter!
Aug 08, 2021
An action scene really is a good hook! (As they say in essay-writing, ugh!) lol well I’m hookedxD
Ooh I like how you give a report of the kind of powers they have. Ice breath sounds hella cool
Oof the only male? Do I smell a harem?🤭😂
Love your imagery! Really makes you picture the scene in your head:)
Your grammar could use some work, but you have an interesting premise. This looks like it’ll be a sci-fi/dystopia maybe? Seriously keep writing because you’ll just improve from here.
Wow this is so tragic yet I couldn’t stop reading lol. Ugh trashy parents are the worst. My dude needs to hang on till he’s eighteen. Totally thought he got hit by the isekai bus at first!
I came for the war unicorns and was not disappointed✌️
Aug 07, 2021
This is a good setup! Awesome start, adding lore and all:)
To:Briar Rhodes
I'm so happy you're enjoying it! There's some more psychology coming up in my later chapters than I originally intended, so hopefully it comes off well!
Aug 04, 2021
Ah no! His arm! This was well-written, keep it up:)
Thanks so much for your feedback! I was worried the descriptions would make it too ~wordy, but you make me feel much better! I really hope you continue to enjoy their story;)
To:FADEX
Oh nooooo! Lmao, I'm so not good with torture scenes and that definitely sounds like it'd be in one!xD
Heyo! This chapter is a bit short and all over the place because I've had finals this week... ugh. But now that I'm through that particular hell, the quality should be a bit better next chapter! Please stay around to find out what happens with these characters:)
Aug 03, 2021
Yay, expanding the world! I like that we're getting more background info now, and especially that they're college students! Not everyone wants to read about high school, lol. Keep it up:D
