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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Jun 02, 2023

To:Pearlyn.M

Yikes! That sounds dangerous. I hope you never accidentally lock yourself out.

And don't worry about it. It's such an unimportant detail, but my brain just wouldn't let it go.

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2023

OK, I hate to be this guy, but I need the deep lore. My infantile brain craves it.

How did he lock her door without her keys?

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2023

Pizza time~

I can't help but notice a distinct lack of VTubing in this chapter.

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2023

I'm a simple guy. I see cats, I read. I like the setup and where this is going.

Ailurophobia

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

You somehow managed to make me feel guilty for blowing off my friends when I was a teenager decades ago because I was an incurable introvert and hated socializing. Nicely done.

BTW, if the president did come out with that top ten list, who do you think would make #1?

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

I second what Kitsune said. Love the imagery of the dreamscape.

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:0

Jun 02, 2023

To:Harmonica Writes

Oh, I love that. Maybe I should steal that idea and have her hide and play her horn, or convince a passerby to play it for her, every time she makes an entrance.

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

To:kazesenken

The "magic" of gunpowder.

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

To:Kitsune

Thank you for saying so! Making the decision to go with an action opening was really difficult. I think I posted 3 different chapter drafts in chat, but there were like 12 others that never saw the light of day.

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

To:WALKER

Admittedly, I was inspired by reading Ascendance of a Bookworm, in which the MC's common sense from Earth conflicts with the common senses of the people in the isekai world. I wanted to explore that more from the opposite direction, even though I know it will be a bit of a challenge to convey this world's common sense to the reader.

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

That was a nice tone curve at the end. I could really feel the franticness, and was refreshing after all the somber self-reflection.

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

"which would hopefully be soon" 😭

Museworld

Chapter:153

Jun 01, 2023

This one didn't change much from the first draft, but I can tell you put in the work to clean it up.

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2023

Contemporary setting is peak fiction. 😜

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2023

I feel for the MC here. I always hated those kinds of long school speeches too.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:1

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