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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

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May 09, 2023

To:JB94

Thank you so much, and welcome back! I hope you enjoyed your time abroad, and I’m really glad the introspection in this chapter resonated.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:14

May 03, 2023

Just between you, me, and the comments section, what anime was mom watching?

My Dad is an Otaku, My Mom is a Fujoshi, and I Wish I Was Dead

Chapter:52

May 02, 2023

I think you've got a tiny typo. sun should be sum.

Museworld

Chapter:122

Apr 30, 2023

Binbows 10? 🤣 That's making it way too easy for the Slashdot nerds.

My Dad is an Otaku, My Mom is a Fujoshi, and I Wish I Was Dead

Chapter:51

Apr 30, 2023

This. This is the chapter. This is the chapter that cuts the closest to Lucille's whole deal so far, even if I disagree with her about the metric system.

It was because Japan was involved.

I once blogged about having similar feelings the first time I watched Akira. The title of the post was "Nuclear Angst and Self-Absorbed Anime Fandom", and it was, ironically, a very self-absorbed post itself, but when you think of things like that, you can't help but try to make it relate back to yourself. It's too large to comprehend through any other lens, and that's exactly what Lucille does in this chapter.

I had no idea about the "This Car Climbed Mount Washington" bumper stickers, so I looked it up, and the Mt. Washington Auto Road is probably the most depressingly American thing I have ever read about.

Just East of Eden

Chapter:3

Apr 30, 2023

Some great lines in this chapter. The opening and ending sentences were perfect, and the description of Freedom Hall was hilarious.

Museworld

Chapter:120

Apr 29, 2023

Hewwo! This is absolutely 100% REAL.

Right here on my phone!!!

Chapter:1

Apr 26, 2023

Dude's a Kidneyhead alright. What a term.

Museworld

Chapter:116

Apr 23, 2023

It's hard for me to believe that someone 22 years old wouldn't consider themselves young, but I'm old, and I guess there's no minimum age for nostalgia.

The reference to Mysterious Girlfriend X was a great choice. Fit well with the theme of the chapter.

I can't believe Honeyfeed's terms of service doesn't let you say "nerds". 😉

Just East of Eden

Chapter:2

Apr 21, 2023

NGL, the way things were shaping up, I was not expecting an ending like that.

Ersatz

Chapter:8

Apr 19, 2023

I've got to admit that I'm worried Katie isn't dealing with her issues, just pretending they don't exist. "No more crime for us, silly" was a hilarious line though.

Museworld

Chapter:109

Apr 17, 2023

Conrad's a decent guy.

Museworld

Chapter:107

Apr 17, 2023

To:Aidan Rigg

TBH, I never expected to write 300,000 words about it either.

Neo Akihabara Meipouchou

Chapter:1

Apr 16, 2023

Fifteen minutes is definitely walking distance. I would totally subscribe to Lucille's newsletter on American car culture.

Exciting to see these characters again. Best of luck with the weekly grind!

Just East of Eden

Chapter:1

Apr 11, 2023

To:JB94

Thanks! I had to brainstorm a lot for ways to describe both the agony and the joy of Sachiko’s contact with Maeko. That went through a lot of revisions.

And that duplicate passage isn’t in my Google Doc. I must have somehow messed something up when copying and pasting. 😳

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:13

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