Dec 23, 2021
ok, actually liked this more than I thought I would. I wasn't expecting to blow through the whole story in 1 session, but here we are lol.
Overall, I'm mixed on this, I liked it, but at the same time I don't really know what to think about it. I agree with Oscar that the twist is visible as day, and part of me wonders if the twist hurts or helps the story.
I liked the characters, and you can see that everything is what she thinks is genuine, least as genuine as she feels she can make it, but it's a bit off, and you do a great job conveying that IMO. That feeling of unease is greatly engineered throughout the story, as well and the innocence of the devil, as a great contrast in a sense
Overall, I liked it, but I'm split on this, the moral ambiguity is good and well made, but I'm not sure I'm a fan of it. I guess I'd put this in the same category as like Joker. I liked it, but don't nessassarilly wanna reread it lol.
Still one of the best in the contest tho, great job
