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otkrlj

Every time I look at the lines, the colors, the shapes that make up Kirby… I see perfection. In this world, we need examples of what not to do, what not to be, how not to act. But so too do we need moral paragons who can show us who we could be. So we must cherish him.

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registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Jun 04, 2022

Idk how much of this you rewrote, but I'm liking this a lot more than the first time I read it. Also Darren still down bad.

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:3

Jun 04, 2022

To:Pearlyn.M

Thanks a ton for reading this! I'll try to work on it a bit to make it flow better. Thanks for the advice.

Infallibility

Chapter:2

Jun 04, 2022

To:Bubbles

Yea exactly what I was worried about. Thanks for pointing this out and for giving it a shot.

Infallibility

Chapter:2

Jun 04, 2022

To:Fuzzy Rabid Usagi

Crap should make this clearer. Thanks for pointing that out

Infallibility

Chapter:3

Jun 03, 2022

apolgy for bad english

where were u wen Supersession die

i was at house reading gep when phone ring

"Supersession is kil"

"no"

Supersession69's Crazy Incursion

Chapter:1

Jun 03, 2022

To:Deleted User

No complaints here! Thanks for listening!

Infallibility

Chapter:2

Jun 03, 2022

To:Dalion Alteri

Glad you liked it!

Infallibility

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2022

To:Dilobre

Thanks for reading!

Infallibility

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2022

To:Deleted User

promise promise promise promise promise AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA spelling is my passion!

Infallibility

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2022

I am in love

alhamdulillah I have waited 3 days for the sun to go down and will starve soon. if allah is among us then i will be smited for sure.

Chapter:0

Jun 02, 2022

To:Deleted User

Yea it's a first chapter lmao. I promace the 2nd will be way more interesting.

Infallibility

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2022

To:Deleted User

Cope

Infallibility

Chapter:2

Jun 01, 2022

To:F.C Fondness

Akane and Nari gang both the beat fr

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Chapter:2

Jun 01, 2022

To:KEWPIEMEAYO

Theres even a free cold shower included 😍

Infallibility

Chapter:2

Jun 01, 2022

literally me fr

FICTION: If you held the power of god in your two hands, would you save the world? Would you doom it? Or would you watch from the sidelines, just as you had done before?

Chapter:1