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Every time I look at the lines, the colors, the shapes that make up Kirby… I see perfection. In this world, we need examples of what not to do, what not to be, how not to act. But so too do we need moral paragons who can show us who we could be. So we must cherish him.

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    Nov 02, 2021

    Finally, it is here lol
    The Heir of the Dragon was an experience, that's the first word that comes to mind. It's a fantasy epic that didn't really feel like one. Those 188K words flew by like a breeze to me, making me want more and more. And The Heir of the Dragon delivers on that promise. When people describe books as fun, it's not always clear what they mean. Some people describe a "fun" novel as one full of interesting fights and cool fluff, not something deep with great character development. The Heir of the Dragon does a great job challenging that notion. While it wears its influences on its sleeves at times, it also does a great job twisting what it takes into its own unique thing.
    Starting with said influences. The most obvious one, intentional of not, is Harry Potter. It's not hard to compare the two, especially in the beginning. With the train and sorting ceremony. What I like about HOTD however is how it takes these tropes and twists them to its own narrative. For starters, the cohort system makes waaaaaay more sense than Harry Potters's house system. The way of sorting also felt unique in its own way, feeling more like a homage than anything else.
    The other one is ASOIAF, or Game of Thrones. This is also pretty clear, though its also not, especially with how Fuzzy handles point of views. The different perspectives created by all the characters really help the story, and feel simmular but different to how this is handled there. Also, we need a Reed POV Fuzzy, actually, we just need more Reed.
    Now to start with the plot, because this is somehow the shortest segment. HOTD tells a linniar story from the perspective of several characters, their own stories intertwining in the main narrative. In the world of HOTD, A war has just ended between the Humans and Elves, and said school is also dealing with the consequences of winning the war against the Elves. Elly's perspective is really important here, and Fuzzy does a great job of showing the discrimination she feels, while also showing how to like, there are good people too. Then there's Blakes, showing another side of the war. Hes the orphin left behind in the carnage, the one who lost everything. I remember reading an article by the guy who wrote The Sympathizer, in with he said that people removed from their homes, their stories are war stories as well. Blake reminded me of that. He is part of the after-effects of the war in a way, a broken Kid damaged by war, only wanting revenge. The other main POV is of Eve, who is the cool and collected... imposter. Her perspective is also interesting, acting on for now unknown goals, but that's more for the future. The other POV is of Damion, a teacher at the academy. Seeing his perspective of the administration helps to show everything behind the scenes, and grasp some of the political stuff happening in the background.
    Next is the Worldbuilding, and oh boy is there a lot. Like I said before, this is a world fresh of war, and it shows. There are the major points, like how Elves and Humans don't really interact, to the more minor stuff, like the slurs they throw at each other. Elly's experiences do a great job showing the state of the world at the moment, and how culture as a whole is reacting. There's also the sky itself. The physical world is incredibly unique and engaging, with a variety of unique geography all around, not to mention that the entire world is floating islands, something that's actually never directly stated to my knowledge, doing a great job at the show not tell approach. Then there's the magic system. On a website full of magic systems, this one stands out. Its about as hard of a magic system as you can get, with extremely clear rules on how everything works. Theres another side to the magic as well, almost a completely different system that's a lot softer too, and that's what I love, Elemental magic, used by several characters, including Blake. The magic system overall reminds me of the system used in The Name of the Wind, with a very hard, and somewhat soft system all in one. There's also the history sprinkled here in there. While we don't have a clear view yet, its clear that there's a ton of history in this world, waiting to be explored.
    Then there's the last major part, the characters, and oh boy. The characters are where HOTD shines. The amount of perspectives and different voices helps the reader understand each character, and HOTD does a great job creating very rounded characters with mutable sides to them. I talked about most of the characters earlier in the review, but I wanted to focus on two specifically here to show different aspects that HOTD excels in, Reed and Sabrina. Reed stands out for mutable reasons. Sure, I want her to step on me, but there's more to it than that. Shes a great example on how characters can have mutable sides, their not just one thing. Reed is that calm, cool, and collected character that seems to weather whatever is thrown at her with no problem. It's only when she talking to Elly (and somewhat blake) that were able to see different sides of her. She has fears doubts, hopes. She's an obsessed dragon nut that practically worships Blake's house, and she is also the cool-headed rock for others to lean on at the same time. The other, Sabrina, is a great example on how people can change. Whine Fuzzy does a good job of keeping her from ever going too far, she's still 100% a bully to Elly, especially at the beginning of the novel. Over the corse of the story however, we see her slowly change as a person, becoming more understanding of others and realizing her flaws. HOTD does a great job having its characters change over time, Sabrina is just one of the more obvious cases.
    Overall, HOTD is an incredible fantasy epic. Despite its large size for a Honeyfeed novel, it goes by like a breeze and leaves you wanting more. Im a huge fan of this novel and what it stands for, and cant wait to read more
    Until next time, otk out.

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    The Heir of the Dragon
    The Heir of the Dragon
    Chapter:49

    Oct 28, 2021

    Ok, review time... finally. This novel has always been in the back of my mind. I loved it the first time, but couldn't get too far because of time constraints with my based rankings. Im so glad I came back and finished it however. This was truly a ride, one that kept me at the edge of my seat. I've said this before, but this is my second favorite novel on honeyfeed. The aura of suspense crated is masterful, and it makes great use of fantasy tropes, mixing them into its dystopian world. To be honest. This feels almost like a mix between Berserk and Girls Last Tour, but in a really weird way. The world of Berserk mixed with the somber abandoned world of GLT leads to a unique experience, especially once magic comes into the mix. Ok, time for the specifics.
    Let's start out with characters. The beginning his with a great baseline for us to get an idea of the dynamics. It really shines here, with her parents fighting and you see the reproductions in the kids, in what I'd consider a realistic manner. Emiko feels scared, alone even surrounded by people. All she really has is her brother, whose her rock. What happens when that rock is taken away though? I loved how Emiko Alone masterfully answers that question. Emiko struggles, a lot, and I love that. She feels human, realistic. Her past trauma and family relations really show in who the person she has become, especially in chapters two to four if I remember right. As she continues on her journey, however, you can see her start to change, slowly. I really liked this aspect too. Most novels have their characters change on a dime. That's simply not how it works. People need time to change, they cant do it in a day, for good or bad. From her absolute reliance on Daiki to the more consistent Emiko we see in chapter 14, you can see the chance she's made. Now obviously, there are other characters as well, and they're all great too. Uris, however, is the one that stands out. She is brave, confident, powerful. The exact opposite of Emiko, on the outside anyway. What's on the inside, however, now that's what's really interesting.
    Now onto the Worldbuilding. The worldbuilding in Emiko is great, twisting on the modern world, and adding its own spark. A world where everyone has disappeared, left with only Emiko, now that's interesting. Nature speeding up bears acting like domesticated dogs. All these things got towards the majestic feel of the new world, and that's only in the first part. It takes a different turn with the introduction of magic I feel. You have a great hard magic system, with bits of softness that help add to the mystery. Lastly, there are also the creatures. They remind me of the Demons from Berserk, chasing after Emiko and her companions, and I feel they invite the same type of almost whimsical fear. The sense of suspense the help to craft helps the novel, and creates much needed tension in the 2nd half of the book.
    Lastly, there's the plot. It shines despite its rather simple premise. It's a mystery to its core, and is always asking questions. I'm my opinion, a good story is a set of questions and answers that cause intrigue and make the reader want to know, and this fits that well. The magical twist in the middle is also well excected. Emiko is a character-oriented tale, and it thrives on this fact.
    Overall, I have very little to complain about here, and heaps of praizes. Emiko does what many an author has attempted to create, and does it with ease. It does a great job at combining several different genrae's and tropes into one collective tale. You will find no complaints from me. oh also VOTE EMIKO ALONE ON THE MAL APP.
    With that out of the way, until next time
    otkrlj

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    Emiko Alone
    Emiko Alone
    Chapter:14