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Shulox

Huracán, Argentina, Writing, in that order. Aiming to write the first latin-american novel in Japan.
If you smiled while reading my works, I won 😊
Find me on Instagram! @shuloxwrites

registered at: Jul 07, 2021

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Jul 06, 2023

Awww this was cute as hell! I'm glad they could finally live happily (that minor interrumptions though 👀). You have a really nice talent to write tender scenes, but I would recommend you to intertwine some actions between dialogue lines, as the reader could easily get lost (happened to me 😅) For example: "Really?" the hero asked.

Apart from that, a great starting point, and hoping how things will develop in the next chapters. I'll be following this one as I free myself from studying, keep it up and welcome to the contest!

Comet's Trail

Chapter:0

Jul 06, 2023

I assume 600 coins is waaaay a lot. But Horse's food must be expensive after all 😅

A Tale of A Thousand Miles

Chapter:1

Jul 06, 2023

To:chibiandreea

Glad you liked it chibi! I'll catch up with Ailurophobia later today, just promise me more Rika cute moments 😅

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:21

Jul 06, 2023

To:jenz.tr

Glad to hear that, thanks! Hoping to see you around for more!

Also nice Elaina pfp ❤️

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:0

Jul 06, 2023

To:Kaisei

Nao just wants some tender loving care, after all ❤️ Takashi too, but as it's his first love, things can be awkward for him 😅

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:17

Jul 06, 2023

To:Kaisei

That would be a great idea, actually. I noticed many had that spaces and told myself to do the same but I indefinitely ignored that lmao. Will look for something, thanks!

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:16

Jul 06, 2023

To:Deleted User

Yes there is! Thanks for your encouragement!

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:15

Jul 06, 2023

To:Deleted User

Keep rooting for him, Tomo, the best is yet to come for him!

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:21

Jul 06, 2023

To:Kitsune

It's little by little, but the reward at the end will be huge ❤️ thanks for your kind words kit!

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:21

Jul 05, 2023

To:Memo Alfonso

Thank youuu, here we are still enjoying haha. I put many references to that world cup (and from argentinean football in general) in my work, that can tell you if I'm enjoying it haha.

Take your time, there's no need to rush. I'm also complicated with studying so time is limited 😅 but nice to meet you and hoping to see you again soon!

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2023

To:Memo Alfonso

That's the spirit, hope to see more!

I mean you are called Memo Alfonso and a player is called Leonel, if that's not spanish i don't know anything else lmao. And very nice detail too, Pirlo is my favourite free kick taker of all time (after messi of course). Also, Andrea is there as a female name right? Like in spanish and not italian

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2023

To:kazesenken

Thanks for the compliment ❤️ but every scene is magical in it's own so don't worry. I would also like to write a light-hearted comedy scene half as good as you do, the soccer and karaoke were amazing

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Chapter:17

Jul 05, 2023

To:Christian Widjaya

Thanks for your words Christian, glad you are liking it!

Two people telling me the same 😭 I'll have to do the same I did with football on the festival: Writer's liberty to create (well they just had that because they were special 😆)

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:15

Jul 05, 2023

To:Deleted User

I'll try to add an exception. If they have soccer, they can have fireworks on the middle day

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:15

Jul 05, 2023

To:minatika

Then I'm rooting for him till the end. If we lose, we lose with honor but with sea horse costumes 😆

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:16

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