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Heya. I’m Arufa. (No correlation to the main character in Parallel in Two.) I’m also C.T. Kimbrough, but most people knew me as Arufa and that will never change.

I write (inconsistently) and draw (inconsistently). My life can be characterized as a series of misfortunate inconsistencies.

My latest inconsistency is Half Human, a sequel to Parallel in Two. I want to have it done this summer to show people at college.

I do all my own cover art. :)

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Mar 07, 2022

Get demolished, Super.

Too bad GEP is discontinued. Would love to read more of it. Would love if Super actually posted a chapter. Would love if Super finished my book. ;-;

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Chapter:40

Mar 06, 2022

I’ll be fully honest in that I think this has been my least favorite chapter so far. It’s clear to me that fight scenes might not be your strong suit, and to write one that envelops the entire chapter must be exhausting. The style in this chapter specifically felt… what’s the word? I think the closest thing I can think of to it would be ‘fan-fic’-y. Removed from the rest of the novel, it feels unprofessional. I mean, heh, given we’re on a webnovel website, I wasn’t really expecting professionalism anyway. But still, I’m a little disappointed.

You started to draw my attention back once Jacob was mentioned. For taking the time to introduce him, I would have thought he’d have a larger presence in the story. For me, having a whole chapter of strictly observation is aggravating. To add to it, I must admit that I don’t care much for Iris and Rose. They’ve just appeared in this other world, with barely any relationship to the main character. Had Iris, say, rescued Jacob earlier and developed a bond with him, then gone back and fought Rose, it would have made it more bearable.

All in all, I have mixed feelings about this chapter, and personally, I don’t see how it contributes to the plot just yet. Though, you’ve blown me away before after something strange, and I don’t doubt you could do it again. I guess time will have us see it through. Farewell. :3

A Wish

Chapter:9

Mar 05, 2022

Ah, shit. I think this is my favorite chapter so far. It seems like a place to stop for now, too. I’ve read quite a bit today.

This philosophy, these themes. They hit so hard. I legitimately think I’ve never seen anything like this online. I can see why this was picked for the contest, because this is just pure good shit. I want more of these interludes, I want more of this. Thank you for blessing me. :3

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:18

Mar 05, 2022

Well, Bastien is dead and Kai gets hugs. All’s well that ends well. :3

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:17

Mar 05, 2022

Kai no.

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Chapter:16

Mar 05, 2022

This isn’t what we want. What we want is Trish to date Kai. This is the only acceptable outcome.

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Chapter:15

Mar 05, 2022

The sex is somehow implemented in a way that isn’t sexual. I have literally no idea how you did this.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:14

Mar 05, 2022

So the ability pool expands. I’m quite intrigued.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:13

Mar 05, 2022

Based Trish.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:12

Mar 05, 2022

Trish narration caught me off-guard, which I’m certain was the intent. Thank you for this blessing.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:11

Mar 05, 2022

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Chapter:10

Mar 05, 2022

I should have kept reading earlier. ;-;

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:9

Mar 02, 2022

Oooooh. Now Pearl’s giving us nightmares, too. ;3

KNOCK KNOCK

Chapter:1

Feb 24, 2022

Oh. *Oh my God.* Is this.

An isekai???

A Wish

Chapter:8

Feb 21, 2022

Mystique. :3

The story’s perspective flips back and forth, but it’s not all that confusing, considering it’s in the third person. So I don’t really mind it. I would suggest leading the readers on a more linear path, but if you know where you’re going with the story, I have no place to stop you.

One more thing I would like to mention is that your chapters vary wildly in length. For example, the last one was quite long in comparison to this one. Keep that in mind as you continue writing. Or don’t. For all I know, the book is already finished.

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Chapter:7

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