Feb 20, 2022
To:Ochroleucous
Oh no, I was 100% joking about the fan service. My comments completely failed to get the "joke" across. I wasn’t expecting any fan service. I just found it funny that the chapter is literally titled "Beach Episode" in spite of the absolute lack of fan service in this novel.
The second comment was originally written as: "Where’s the fan service? They’re just doing wholesome, fun stuff at the beach. What is this? Is this clickbait?" It was meant to express my non-existent disappointment with the chapter’s lack of fan service (still not sure why I wanted to do that). But it came off as aggressive, so I cut away most of it. xD
I’m glad to hear that this story will be revisited and improved. I look forward to the additions, and I hope there won’t be too many changes. I really think this is much better without fan service, though.
I apologise for the misleading comments. :)