Feb 20, 2022
It’s Internet Explorer, isn’t it?
I’m glad I got the chance to read this. I used to think supernatural stories weren’t really my thing... Well, not anymore.
I like the character intros at the start. Our main character introduces himself as "ME". I don’t know why, but I like that.
So, at one point, Nick says, "See you in an hour in your door." I can kind of see how that would be possible from a supernatural perspective, and how it adds to the world-building, but there’s also that slim chance that it’s just a typo.
Lastly, "Yo" is the ultimate greeting; it is far superior to "Hi". Thank you.