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Jul 22, 2021
Enteng and Enang is gonna get real confusing lol. At first I thought it was a typo. Before I thought Enteng was just crazy, now I think he's just a psychic projection of George.
Wait, so this world has instant chicken noodles? I'm realizing there isn't much I understand about the setting, lol. And Enteng is clearly nuts, but what do you expect? The tone of this is, uh... interesting though.
I'm not sure what the some parts were supposed to mean. Line. But George has appeared! Line. On another note, you seem to jump between past and present tense a lot, might want to fix that. ... Line.
Still not entirely sure what's happening but there is good imagery. The MC is slowly becoming clearer in my head but the voice feels a little stilted.
Finally checked it out, wasn't disappointed so far! It painted a very distinctive picture with good sensory details. I could feel the emotion coming off of the POV character, although at certain points I felt kind of jerked around, like the pacing felt weird. I will move on to the next chapters
Jul 21, 2021
I really liked the premise! The idea of an isekai where the character reincarnates as someone who was already an established person with relationships and apparently a lover/lover-to-be seems like it opens the door to a lot of character introspection and growth, I really want to see where it goes from here!
I look forward to seeing where the story goes from the intro, curious.
Jul 17, 2021
To:Deleted User
Thank you! Was there anything you liked in particular?
To:Syed Al Wasee
Thank you! I'll check it out!
Jul 15, 2021
To:Rui
Thank you for pointing that out! I completely missed that part in the sections I read on the contest!
