Aug 15, 2021

To:Nellien

Hush you, stop ruining it with math.
Another important factor is that Famineans don't need to eat live humans. Many of them work in hospitals and mortuaries in order to get a steady supply of human flesh.
Also, there are "human farms" that breed humans for sale underground, but that's a little too dark to focus on.

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Aug 15, 2021

To:Nellien

It's absolutely going somewhere, Chapter 2 should set the tone nicely.

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Aug 15, 2021

To:Nellien

Thank you for finding those!

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Aug 13, 2021

To:Deleted User

Um, yeah... Amy's character... and development...
Yes, those are certainly things that we'll get in this book, alright...😰

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Aug 08, 2021

To:rikichii

Thank you! And you're not the first person to draw comparisons lol.

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Aug 06, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

It is simply true. Ueda-san could never be thought of as human.

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Aug 06, 2021

To:Deleted User

It will absolutely be a wholesome romance, whatever do you mean?

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Aug 06, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thanks for your review! Blake may seem a little bland, but he IS the self-inse...
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I mean, main character, so that's to be expected. Hopefully he'll liven up. As for Elly's bullies, well... I promise that they're not just flat characters for Elly's development.

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Aug 03, 2021

To:Sujin 崇神

I hope you like them! Good luck on your studies! I hope your exams are easier than these kids' are!

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Aug 03, 2021

To:Sujin 崇神

Not only that, she kinda-sorta has a pseudo-harem of demon girl spirits, although they're more like annoying sisters.

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Aug 03, 2021

To:Sujin 崇神

Thank you! I'm sorry to say, though, blonde girl isn't into guys.
But don't worry, there's another blonde girl coming you can ship him with. 😏

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Aug 03, 2021

To:Sujin 崇神

Hopefully things will improve for Elly when she gets to school. Though they probably won't...😭

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Aug 03, 2021

To:Sujin 崇神

Thank you so much! I'm glad I got Alaine and Marea across well. We only had a bit of time with them, so I really wanted to make them people you would care about!

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Aug 02, 2021

To:rikichii

Thank you! I'm learning to not do so many wordy intro paragraphs.

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Aug 02, 2021

To:rikichii

Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad Elly's voice came across! My paragraphs are definitely pretty dense. I try to only break up paragraphs when I change topics, is there anywhere that was really noticeable?

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