Mar 15, 2025

To be honest, I feel like this was one of the better interactions between sakuya and jumo. I guess it’s because it’s sort of refreshing to see a new way of bonding, rather than just the typical “do you like my cooking?” trope (which I can still be wholesome tho).
That itching tattoo of his DEFINITELY has something to do with his supernatural powers or something of the sort

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Mar 15, 2025

To:Slow

I can relate to that more than words can describe man
Thank you SO much for stopping by and reading and thanks for your words. MY BELOVED FRIEND :D

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Mar 15, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

If I’m being honest, if he comes off s an ayanokoji type character right now, maybe he’s been made out to be a little too Machiavellian.
But maybe that’s okay..
Hm.

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Mar 15, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

CLASSROOM OF THE ELITE VIBES?!?
I guess I’ll take that as a compliment lol.
We all love Han Quixote don’t we 😂

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Mar 15, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

HAHA I did not expect you to give a paragraph explanation but it’s nice cuz now I feel special

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Mar 14, 2025

We really just got a life story haha
At first I was indifferent about the monologue but it was actually quite intriguing

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Mar 14, 2025

Cool prologue honestly. Liking the setting and style so far.

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Mar 14, 2025

To:Han Quixote

Dude you always have so much to say and you say it so well 😭 absolutely gifted
You’re absolutely right about this chapter being a sort of foundation for what’s to come. It connects with the next chapter WHCIH I AM CURRENTLY TRYING TO FINISH and I just hope you will see the direction im trying to take this after reading it. Don’t know if youll like it or not haha but I hope you do. Thanks for sticking around man really

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Mar 14, 2025

wow i loved how you introduced tani. blackmailing the guy over him clogging the toilet is crazy ☠️

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Mar 14, 2025

Zero-hair policy caught me off guard 😂

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Mar 14, 2025

Dude the way Ivy talks is HILARIOUS LMAO
You know the humor is good when it makes you laugh at someone’s suffering.
“excess vape fumes violated my nostrils” COME ON BRO 😭

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Mar 14, 2025

Bro this is hilarious and such a good concept. I love how no matter what you’re talking about it always feels like it has an air of sarcasm or humor in it. If you end up blending some great innovative serious and emotional and desperate moments into this (which im sure you will) I feel like that will really be a true test to see whether you can incorporate that into your style. Looking forward to seeing that in this work. The ape man still has me laughing.
ALSO BRO DONT YOU DARE RESPOND TO ME WITH THE COPY PASTE “Thanks for checking this out.” LINE THAT YOUVE BEEN GIVING EVERYONE ELSE LOL

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Mar 14, 2025

Lol bucket head was the highlight of the chapter for me
Now that I’ve caught up, I’d like to say that I can sort of see where this story is trying to go (unless you end up surprising me) and I think you’re doing a pretty good job so far of setting up the world for that. The only thing I really want as of right now is to have a better grasp on the personalities of the characters, especially the main two. But I’m sure that comes with time.
Things are looking good so far though. Keep it up.

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Mar 14, 2025

This is probably my favorite chapter so far. Wholesome and funny banter between the two and it feels like the calm before the storm

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Mar 14, 2025

AHHH ENDING WAS SO CRYPTIC AND COOL

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