Mar 17, 2025
To:Han Quixote
Wow youre probably right. This site allows for some really genuine interactions to take place and that I feel is what helps the most for writers. You’re right though, most people are just focused on their own works, which, in my opinion, isnt really a good thing. I feel like too many people just write and write without looking at the outside world and seeing different perspectives, which is a crucial thing for people like us. Comparing yourself to others sort of is necessary. To be honest I really like reading people’s works anyway tho haha
You keep complimenting my writing bro I appreciate it so much 😭 thanks (for the trillionth time) for taking the effort to read and give me advice on it :D
Here’s an early congrats on breaking the 25k word mark! I gotta say Thats commendable especially for the amount of thought you seem to put into your writing.
In your foundational chapters, what mainly hooked me was the overall premise. It was cool haha idk what more I can say. Atlas “held up the sky”? Literally awesome. But more than that, I think it was the anticipation you make the reader feel from clearly laying out, in particular, Victor’s goals and seeing how his resolve and determination completely contrasts from Atlas’s.
I guess what im trying to say is that I saw so much potential. You laid out the groundwork for a story that, from my perspective, has characters whose motivations and identities will make them eventually cross. And everything leading up to that point is what I want to see. It was sort of like I was watching fate zero episode 1 or something lol.
Anyway, im looking forward to those chapters.
