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Jul 19, 2021
I love the premise of the novel and your first chapter. assuming the large space is for impact, I feel the large block of space for the final word is beyond overkill for readers who read this wonderful work on a phone or tablet (especially for just 1 word). I personally think it would have been better (both impact and display) to reveal it in the next chapter, reduce the space block to 2 or 3 lines or perhaps express it artistically (what comes to mind is the word itself written in the liquid as an image). But it’s an intriguing opening
