Jul 22, 2021
To:animegirl2008
animegirl2008, comments like yours are my favorite type of comment because you are sharing with me some of the things I did well and areas for improvement, and you were nice enough to tell me what you even want to see. I can't thank you enough for caring to share 👍
Grammar is definitely not my strong suit, that's why chapters are posted once a week instead of more frequently, to give time for the review process (I will look into Beta Reader, thank you for that suggestion).
I really appreciate the concerns you bring up, especially about the misogynistic impression the work brings. The next few chapter will hopefully answer your expectations. Originally, I wanted to combine the next chapter with chapter 1 to balance the negative aspect of chapter 1 with something more positive/less condescending/misogynistic. The chapter length got too long and chapter 1 was a grammatical mess. My thought process at the time was just get the novel up to see how readers feel about the premise of the story, I decided to wait and work on the grammar rather than have readers suffer with another not so grammatically sound chapter.
I look forward to our future dialogues animegirl2008 😁
