Oct 17, 2021
Personally, I feel the development was too fast and it felt a bit unbelieveable. If Miwa passed out from what I presume is anemia or some other medical issue, I'm not sure its wise to bring her back to class that fast.
The "I'm choosing Yua line threw me off." I thought it was Yua who said that line, I can't see the shy/reserved "Miwa" saying that.
I'm going out on a limb, but gauging how Yua treats Miwa, she has either noticed Miwa checking her out or she is even more infatuated by Miwa than Miwa is with Yua (which can be interesting or scary depending on how you write it)
I would like for you to publish at least 2 more chapters before I say anything further, if you enjoy writing the story.