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If I enjoy a novel, I barge in the comments section to show appreciation
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Oct 15, 2021
To:Deleted User
Challenge accepted.
Just kidding. The professor is a different generation of cool, or maybe I'm the only one who thinks he is cool
Is he cooler than Mahad though? 🤔
Oct 10, 2021
Everyone is entitled to their opinion. As an author who wants this story to become one readers enjoy, listening to the thoughts readers raise can only help me achieve that goal. So please, never apologize if what you share is what you genuinely feel or believe. :)
joke or not, its still an interesting observation Tomoyuki and I really appreciate the insight you brought to me with your analysis. I love deep thought comments the most :)
I mean as cool as DB and Transformers are, how would we scientifically replicate fusion with actual humans (or human like creatures)? This fusion technique was the best answer after quite a bit of research was done on it (whether or not its the ideal technique is still debatable)
As for the chimera turning out to be a beast-warrior, our MC (and the rest of us) isn't sure what kind of animal the new appearance and calling it creature/monster the whole time would sound odd to some readers. But in hindsight, Chimera is also misleading
indeed, although it was an incredible ordeal. Would you go to work if an intruder broke into your house in the middle of the night?
probably not, but at the very least TokyoFox (and possibly others who seek to self promote) realizes not every author will appreciate such comments (and that's a step in the right direction.
I believe they approach stories with relatively low views, since most times those authors have no comments and the comments they make do get good reactions from most authors.
It could also be they want to maintain their gold badge since gold is really rare
she got criticized because there was an alternative she could have taken that would have resulted in avoiding the scenario she just went through.
Though I too am proud of her for doing what she could despite the mess she got herself in, if the officer is to be believed.
They are fused (they become one being for the duration of the spell/technique), its just a different kind of fusion process from Dragonball or Transformers.
I admit this is one of those sequences that could probably have benefited from an artistic representation than just words.
yes, there had to be something to reward the readers who made it this far :)
Thanks Tomoyuki. Things have definitely improved since back then although I did have . I've learned a couple handy tricks since getting the feedback and I'll be steadily weaving it in to this chapter (after revising chapter 2). I don't plan to leave the issues of the story the readers have pointed out ignored
Absolutely, and after doing some research and reflection, I think I found a much better way. This chapter will be replaced by the revision
I think given its a webnovel, people reading quickly is pretty normal. And its not the first time I've been given this comment.
Reiterating in the prologue, any comment is perfectly valid.
I chose to start with this chapter because later on in the story because this flirtation/romance will come up a few times along the course of the story and will play a role in some of the events that this volume will cover. I realize given how I present the story, opening up on this chapter feels strange, but there is a method to the madness of my storytelling
I think its great you were willing to step forward and share. It also made me realize I need to adjust my authors note, because I can see more might misunderstand the intentions of the declaration. So thank you very much
