Aug 07, 2021
To:Ataga Corliss
Thank you for your detailed comment as always, Marshall.
I think my current plan is to finish the story, and if I ever get the chance to I'll probably end up rearranging the events as well as changing the synopsis.
Beyond a storytelling perspective, I would like to know what you think of the System itself. Are you interested in it? Disinterested? Does it feel generic?
Sorry for the barrage of questions, I'm just very curious since even I feel I pulled this out of nowhere. I'll be checking out your story right after I post this!
