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Jul 24, 2021

Pray for salivation...

Your prose is clearly good, and honestly, the premise of a reverse-Isekai is quite funny. I'm just sad this doesn't seem to be blowing up, and it's probably because there's no cover. :(

I will keep reading though! This has no pitfalls of a typical web novel (grammatical errors, unreadable prose, run-on sentences, etc.)

By the way, will we be seeing a second Isekai'd person?

Mylo and the Summoned Hero

Chapter:2

Jul 24, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

You will see more of Mari. As the writer, I can guarantee you that.

I'll get to reading your newest chapter soon, too!

Why I Write

Chapter:3

Jul 24, 2021

To:JayDKidd

Thank you, Jay!

Yes, the story is... a story about a story, written by a man, about a girl who writes stories, and in his story, many girls want to write stories.

The premise in a nutshell!

Why I Write

Chapter:0

Jul 24, 2021

To:jaldaen

Thank you! I hope you check out chapter 2 as well :)

Why I Write

Chapter:0

Jul 23, 2021

I love how your writing style is the opposite of mine. I don't mean that in a bad way, I'm just impressed because it's something I would never be able to do. Like the world building and writing in 3rd person... I think I struggle with describing settings, which is why I've always picked urban locations when I write. That's why reading the beginning of this felt refreshing.

I also love how you wrote Kasumi as a klutz/a person who's not quite alright. I guess we both enjoy our weirdo heroines :)

Mylo and the Summoned Hero

Chapter:1

Jul 23, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

Thank you so much. I was worried about my opening, and maybe dropping the Prologue altogether because it felt too 'out there'.

I hope you enjoy!

Why I Write

Chapter:0

Jul 23, 2021

To:Verson

Thank you so much for your support, Verson!

Why I Write

Chapter:2

Jul 23, 2021

This is hilarious. I love the writing metahumour as well, like the part about doing research. So relatable.

The "This is a Wendy's" meme is also really funny. The set-up and the arrogance of the main character too, and especially the part about 'real' writers looking down on light novels is so true...

My own work has some metahumour in it too, so please check it out if you have the time!

Anyone Can Write A Light Novel!

Chapter:1

Jul 23, 2021

Kazuma! Like Konosuba? 😆

Master Of Rejections But Beginner At Love

Chapter:0

Jul 23, 2021

To:Verson

Thank you so much, Verson! 😁

Comments like yours is the reason why I write :)

Why I Write

Chapter:1

Jul 23, 2021

Hello, Takahashi-kun!

Your writing style is very heavy, in a good way—just like the themes of your book, and it complements how serious the rest of the set-up feels. From the book cover, the synopsis, to the writing style, it’s like a real novel!

I wish I had the courage to explore a topic like suicide so directly in my own writing, and I love the authenticity of Yuki’s note (as dreadful as that sounds).

I will save this for a day I feel happier to read. Please check out my novel too!

Along The Way

Chapter:1

Jul 23, 2021

To:Syed Al Wasee

Thank you so much!

Your novel is so professional, from the way the first letters are bolded, to the well-designed cover, to the literary feel of the first few paragraphs… I am looking forward to it!

Why I Write

Chapter:0

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