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Sep 29, 2021

I do indeed believe Kai seems to be the one not getting something this chapter

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:28

Sep 29, 2021

You know, I really think I'm starting to like Trish quite a bit. I also see that Kai learned from her mistakes last chapter.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:27

Sep 29, 2021

I find it amusing that she made fun of Aaron for the exact same thing she did herself a few minutes earlier.

Other than that, the kiss on the cheek may have happened, but overall I kind of feel like Kai and Trish seem to have better chemistry than Trish and Aaron just from what we've seen (I mean, maybe I'm just reading too much into things, but some of their comments make them come across as somewhat g
gay, or well, at least one or two from a few chapters ago that I don't remember who made them)

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:26

Sep 29, 2021

Agreed on the apple juice, disagree with the salad

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:12

Sep 29, 2021

Paul's clearly just really dedicated to the whole author thing

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:7

Sep 29, 2021

Now that I think about it, a power letting you tell people what to do might not actually be that strong if they don't have to obey the intent behind it and you're not smart enough to think of potential loopholes for everything

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:4

Sep 29, 2021

Kai may think it's stupid, but my first impression is that the t-shirt actually is surprisingly clever. Kind of hard not to look at that.

Other than that I'm kind of bad at returning compliments, so I guess my human nature isn't strong enough yet. Will work on it.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:3

Sep 24, 2021

And I've reached the end! Nice job on finishing the story, since it sounded like you were about to give up on it for a while back when... Well, when it sounded like you were about to give up on it. I already said a bunch about the first half in my comments back then, so because of that and since I have like a dozen other things I should be doing(actually just three, but a dozen sounds more impressive), I'll just say that it was a fun read, and that's really all I personally need to get out a story. I guess I'll maybe check out your future stuff when it arrives? But at the same time I don't really use instagram, so that will depend entirely on my ability to remember it until then(I do have a pretty good memory though)

I wanted to end the comment in a nice-sounding way, but I'm too tired to think of one, and it's not like this is a book or anything where the way I end it actually matters, so that was... yeah, it was a comment. Written by me. About a story, written by you. That I overall would say I enjoyed, even if I had to pause partway through due to starting my last semester of university a couple of days before the contest deadline.

Why I Write

Chapter:31

Sep 23, 2021

Yay, a title drop. I like title drops(I'd say more but I have more important stuff I should be doing anyway, so I'm just glad I've managed to continue reading)

Why I Write

Chapter:26

Sep 12, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thanks :)

Fighting For My Freedom In Another World

Chapter:49

Sep 12, 2021

This is another pretty old one :)