Sep 24, 2021
And I've reached the end! Nice job on finishing the story, since it sounded like you were about to give up on it for a while back when... Well, when it sounded like you were about to give up on it. I already said a bunch about the first half in my comments back then, so because of that and since I have like a dozen other things I should be doing(actually just three, but a dozen sounds more impressive), I'll just say that it was a fun read, and that's really all I personally need to get out a story. I guess I'll maybe check out your future stuff when it arrives? But at the same time I don't really use instagram, so that will depend entirely on my ability to remember it until then(I do have a pretty good memory though)
I wanted to end the comment in a nice-sounding way, but I'm too tired to think of one, and it's not like this is a book or anything where the way I end it actually matters, so that was... yeah, it was a comment. Written by me. About a story, written by you. That I overall would say I enjoyed, even if I had to pause partway through due to starting my last semester of university a couple of days before the contest deadline.
