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Aug 31, 2021

Got it. I will go back and edit all chapters. Thank you.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:2

Aug 31, 2021

Oh you meant Kenue. Sorry, I must be going senile lol. Must be a side effect of writing a lot and having to translate it into English for these past few weeks. English isn’t my first language, so please excuse any mistakes. I’m working on improving my English. Thank you.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:1

Aug 31, 2021

To:Deleted User

Yes. Italics is for flashbacks and inner monologues.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:2

Aug 31, 2021

To:Deleted User

Sorry for the late reply. I was writing and editing the latest chapter.

There's only one young man, tho. I made sure to use "the young man" instead of "a young man" after the first one.

The reason for that is that the fight with the Croco triggered something in Roman.

Thank you kindly for your feedback.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:1

Aug 30, 2021

Yes, he is.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:1

Aug 30, 2021

What's secial?

Scorpion Grasses or simply, Forget-me-nots

Chapter:18

Aug 30, 2021

This is my first time writing novel and in English no less, so naturally it's going to be awkward and stilted. I'm planning to edit it when I have finished. Your helpful feedback is greatly appreciated. Thank you kindly.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:2

Aug 30, 2021

Thank you. Okay, will do.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:1

Aug 30, 2021

Thank you.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:21

Aug 30, 2021

Thank you. I'm glad you like it. Alright, will do.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:5

Aug 26, 2021

To:L Ryuzaki

Thank you. I'm so glad to hear that. I hope you enjoyed it.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:20

Aug 23, 2021

To:L Ryuzaki

Thank you...

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:17

Aug 23, 2021

To:Sata Sani

Thank you.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:16

Aug 19, 2021

Yes, he is. Hmm we'll see... Maybe I'll add a little romance to this story, but I won't focus on that ofc. This is an action novel after all.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:14

Aug 19, 2021

Heck yeah! He's my favorite character, too. "You reap what you sow" indeed.

Tears of Wars: The Heroes are Born

Chapter:10

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