Jul 24, 2022

Holly, I never thought I would right that Mitsuko is yuri, just not for Hinata but Emiko instead!

Nothing is truly as it seems and it is exciting to read on not knowing what to expect~

One strange observation:
Is there a shift in perspective from Hinata's first person perspective to a third person perspective involving Emiko and Co. in the secret club room or was the whole club room scene being observed by Hinata and F-kun from somewhere? Either way, the ambiguity is there and might plausibly lead to confusion...

Eager to read on nonetheless

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Jul 24, 2022

To:Liber Mercury

There is a Chinese saying:
One who stays near vermilion gets stained red,
One who stays near ink gets stained black

It is amazing to note how the human being can be so easily influenced by those around them...

It is always so inspiring to listen to others reaching out for their dreams,
For I am so far gone that I have successfully convinced myself that the path charted by those around me is indeed my ultimate main goal

Glad to be part of the journey in however small shape or form,
See you at the end, Liber

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Jul 23, 2022

Stories about creaters and their created always have a soft spot for me and I always love it when others talked about them,

However, I have a feeling that this is but a small portion of what I would believe to be an anthology of sorts linked together by the observer here who could very well be one of us readers~

Got to find out next chapter then!

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Jul 23, 2022

Eagerly waiting!
I may have only stumbled upon this now and I too wish to send over my read and support~

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Jul 22, 2022

Captivated, I am completely captivated!
I did say to take your time and I still stand by that but please do continue this and see it to its intended conclusion unbogged by schedules or the such however long you need~

I will also leave this here for note:
"...on on such that legendary..."

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Jul 22, 2022

As I was reading, a few words were screaming at me, stuff like "National Service", "Two years", "Sergeant", "Second Lieutenant", so much so that I have to ask and if you are fine with answering:
Do you happen to be Singaporean?

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Jul 22, 2022

To:K. Concordia

Love to hear and no rush really~
I too has plans to continue the story I wrote for MALxHoneyFeed 2021 but after a year, no real words came out... (Got the scenes all played out in my head though...)

All the best for this year's competition and I will see you around!

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Jul 22, 2022

Alex and Henrietta's interactions are really reminiscent to that of those between childhood friends, they both knew each other for so long they each bares no holds barred for the other~

Really liking it and the thought you put into forming up the world of Titania with its rich history to a hint of turbulent times long past

Late but still, would recommend limiting one paragraph to 2-3 sentences, maximum of 6-9 clauses so that it is easier on the readers' eyea but other than that, good work so far!

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Jul 22, 2022

Can't really say why but I am really taking a liking to the way you write both here a year ago and over at The Young Archivist's Records now.

Can really resonate with the deeply thought-out world that you can picture in you mind almost as if you have lived through it but somehow unable to fully show it with words alone~

From synopsis alone, it does give off a "Tale of Two Cities vibes" with two characters from different places pitted together for interaction,

Interested to see what spark would they rub off!

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Jul 22, 2022

Constance's reactions to being abducted are stoic and rational, fitting for the academic that he is but one can't help but hope he would at least throw a tantrum even as a little when leaving his home planet...

I'm sorry but I think I laugh a little too much at Jason's last name. I guess you would say the Institute and Federation's responses regarding the matter is:

Goodenough

I will show myself out

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Jul 22, 2022

"The Library of Babel" and other stories with a setting of an infinite library are always so intriguing!

Boardering the concept of Eternity, it presents a big big world against an insignificant self and all the more challenging to see how Constance (Name yet to be introduced) rebuild her normalcy!

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Jul 22, 2022

To:PinkPearlPrincess

The both of them do suit each other in a way~
Can't wait to see what kind of couple they would become!

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Jul 21, 2022

The more chapters down the line, the more dangerous Hinata's inner thoughts become...
Let's hope she is not tool-zoned by F-kun~

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Jul 21, 2022

F for Mitsuko x2...
But he isn't wrong abt the "Naive" part...

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Jul 21, 2022

Yep, really liking how this story dosen't play by the books with twist after another!

The characters are interesting in that they do not try to be likeable but focus on doing what they want (not that it is a bad thing), making the story and their interactions taking a life of their own!

Hope that make sense in conveying that I'm quite captivated in continuing reading~

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