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A few stories had been gnawing at my mind for the past few years. This mght be a a good opportunity to pen them down!

Weekdays would be very busy for me but I will be sure to interact over the weekends.

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registered at: Aug 02, 2021

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Aug 31, 2021

To:bugajsha

☆⌒(ゝ。∂)

CirCular

Chapter:0

Aug 31, 2021

To:bugajsha

I am glad that you liked what you see so far~
The back and forth is something akin to a coping mechanism for "him" that constantly reminds "him" that "he" is still sane

CirCular

Chapter:0

Aug 30, 2021

Script-like structure, that is an interesting way of looking at it. I had always wrote it like this since I always confuse myself between who's talking when LN's only used open and close inverted commas... Guess that is just a me thing.

"He" would most likely not like what he finds behind the door~
☆⌒(ゝ。∂)

CirCular

Chapter:0

Aug 30, 2021

I have never seen that~
What is it like?

CirCular

Chapter:2

Aug 29, 2021

To:Deleted User

You got it, Kyo~

CirCular

Chapter:12

Aug 27, 2021

To:Deleted User

Nah, watch enough anime and eventually, you can pick this up too~

Densetsu Kenshi: Beginnings

Chapter:1

Aug 26, 2021

Finally got the time to read this! Kept you waiting, huh~

In addition to the Hand Sani-tiser part, I really like your reference to sani-ty and the lack thereof when you continue to apply it. I can almost hear the "Did I ever tell you the definition of insanity" at the back of my mind.

Very curious on how Miyamoto-san came to set her eyes on Seiji~

A small thing I noticed:
The Romanji for your title is "Densetsu Kenshi" but the last part of its Kanji counter part is just "剣" (Ken). Are you going for "The Legendary Sword" or "The Legendary Swordsman" (剣士)? Personally, I think the romanji "Densetsu no Kenshi" sounds a lil' better but I'm not sure if it there Jap grammar implications...

Anyways, I can't wait to continue to read on!
All the best to approximately the last week of the competition~

Densetsu Kenshi: Beginnings

Chapter:1

Aug 26, 2021

Would you believe me if I say there's more?

The other unique part of M*lan's stories was her exemplary fighting prowess that even gotten the attention of the emperor back then. That might be due to her race not as Han Chinese but one of the ethnic groups that specialized in hunting back then, especially in the arts of firing arrows with both their hands while simultaneously riding on horses.

CirCular

Chapter:10

Aug 24, 2021

To:cmoneyjr

Thank you for liking my stuff! I remember seeing you around quite often~

The cover is minimalistic but I am planning on changing it twice in the near future. Don't worry, the motif of the two Cs forming a ring would remain!

Synopsis-wise, I done it up 15 mins before the Prologue was uploaded. I feel that it might need some work yet at the same time, it perfectly encompasses what the mansion would entail and Yang's motivations and personality...

As for brackets for dialogue, that is because I feel they "cover" dialogue better whereas for quotation marks, they are rather small and hence hard to be noticed.

I will be sure to give Densetsu no Kenshi a read~
All the best to the last two weeks of the competition!

CirCular

Chapter:0

Aug 24, 2021

Quite the hilarious read!
I like how the story started out with the mention of mall cop and ended with the mention of mall cop, like a loop really that ends on itself.

A bit sad for the main character, dying on the first day of his dream job but the drastic contrast between appearance vs reality of the spy as a vocation really made the joke.

Spy Academy [short] The V.V.V

Chapter:1

Aug 24, 2021

A very interesting concept testing the limits of the human mind and the possibility of the manifestation of the conscious and subconscious mind!

Have you by chance play/ read/ watch a certain anime by the name of "Chaos; Head" or "Chaos; Child" of the Science Adventure Series?

'course they do dwell on similar topics as this and I can't wait to what is your take of their concept of "Real-booting"!

The first few description paragraphs feels a little too packed for one paragraph. I would advise breaking them up into my para but that might just be a me problem.

Anyways, looking forward to reading on~

Meisekimu (明晰夢)

Chapter:1

Aug 23, 2021

To:Deleted User

Putting me in quite the spot here seeing how I only completed Chap 1 of Psychology Handbook
(Forgive me, Kyo but I promise to read it when I do have the time)
(シ_ _)シ

But coming from chapter 1 alone, Akari herself was quite the interesting character to me already. She gave off this tom-boyish vibes from both Chap 1 and your cover art illustration which was a character trait that I am quite fond of.

Her hitting her head on the pole was such a small detail but it showed her Dojiko side which provided quite the gap moe.

I will be sure to tell you if my fav changes but I have a feeling it won't. Tomboys are pretty cool after all!

CirCular

Chapter:8

Aug 23, 2021

Don't be shy to continue to write even when there is no competition or anything~

I will see you around!

Reincarnated? Really? As what? Some kind of Genie? (RAG?)

Chapter:5

Aug 22, 2021

To:Arrhythmia

Glad you liked Yang!
"He" would be present in most of the chapters with more inner monologues and stuff!!

CirCular

Chapter:0

Aug 22, 2021

To:Kimio Ashiya

Thank you for liking my stuff!
Meisekimu is a very interesting concept, the premise reminds me a lot of Inception actually.

Looking forward to start reading~

CirCular

Chapter:0

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