Oct 06, 2021
Here's my congratulations to you. "The Time Capsule- Part 1" is currently the 8th in terms of weekly ranking and had been so ever since last week. Seriously, good job!
I think it might be because I had read WNs like Re:Zero and is used to their longer lengths that allowed me to read this whole chapter without a problem. Although many others on HoneyFeed would recommend short 1,500-word chapters, I am one of those weirdos that determines chapter length not by their word count but in terms of their narrative plot progression so word count never quite matter...
Love the effort put into the physical accuracies of everything. Calculating time elapsed based on prior findings on metabolic slowdown and average hair and nail growth is really clever. The similarities to Dr Stone grows ever more with minor differences (Senku had yet to get his hands on any PhDs yet~). Can't wait to read more!
When I write, I often find myself lapsing into the same sentence structures like starting sentences with "I" and had to intentionally avoid that habit so as to sound less monotonous. You might be having that same problem and I hope to take this moment to point it out to you in hopes of spicing up your future writing~
Another possible point to take note might be the mix of romanji within English sentences. It is at best quirky but at worst cringy when reading for some and it might be to your best interest to stick to one for the whole sentence
Of course, those are just my words and you don't have to take any of them and stick to your own style. What is more important is to have fun while writing!
I will see you around and all the best to your prompt next week~
