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A few stories had been gnawing at my mind for the past few years. This mght be a a good opportunity to pen them down!

Weekdays would be very busy for me but I will be sure to interact over the weekends.

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Nov 04, 2021

To:ocrali

You have no idea how much your words meant to me!
CirCular was one among a few story ideas that had been gnawing at my mind for the past few years and I am glad that Yang and co. are appreciated~

Good eye catching those small issues, I will see what I can do with them~

CirCular will return and I hope I would still see you then~
Can't wait to see what you have in store too!

CirCular

Chapter:13

Oct 27, 2021

To:ocrali

Doren can smell the lack of testosterone on Yang~

His way with words and the way he thinks in stanzas instead of prose is, in reality, my way of being lazy...
(シ_ _)シ
I was having a lot of trouble meeting my intended timeline for that week so instead of tying myself down by that, I just screw it and crafted his personality around being straight-forward and straight-to-the-point which turned out surprisingly well (That and getting myself to learn that a three-releases-a-week is something I never want to touch with the 10 feet pole ever again)~

"Dorren"->"Doren"
Good spot, this should be a simple fix and it certainly is but the more I looked at the difference of R and RR, the more I believed that it might bear more meaning than that of a misspelling. This was indeed a misspelling at the time of publishing but looking back at it now, I think I am able to imbue new meaning for it in the Continuation of CirCular!

CirCular

Chapter:6

Oct 24, 2021

To:ocrali

The world might end if they do...
*That's where the fun begins*

CirCular

Chapter:5

Oct 22, 2021

How I wish I can get some Okonomiyaki right now this instance...

Ichirou best boy so far~

Boundaries

Chapter:4

Oct 22, 2021

"Manime"...

Personally, it sounds like the name of a Anime Distribution Company more so than the isekai containing all things anime and anime games (Eg Animax, Aniplex, Aniplus, AT-X etx)...
Although, perhaps that's the twist: That in Konoko's world, there is such a company, maybe even the company that she is working under, which is secretly run by Manime guardians just so that they can facilitate the creation and termination of fictional characters, all dystopia style~

Just a thought ☆⌒(ゝ。∂)

It is also very mature for Konoko to turn down her call for adventure having learnt that the balance of both worlds are governed by a certain form of Le Chatelier Principle. She is growing on me more and more!

Boundaries

Chapter:3

Oct 22, 2021

Cutting the perspective between Konoko and the real world and Chie/ Saitou and the fictional sphere in the same chapter is really intriguing. It forces the reader to read on to grasp a better picture of what is happening and I can't say I hate that~

This chapter is meant to show Konoko's reality collide with the fictional sphere but I find myself fascinated by the fact that Noko is a Tomboy.

Tomboys are cute!

Boundaries

Chapter:2

Oct 20, 2021

To:ocrali

☆⌒(ゝ。∂)

CirCular

Chapter:3

Oct 17, 2021

I actually loved the relationship dynamic between the three more than anything. Heck, I think I am even ok if you just did a whole Slice-of-Life series with the trio overcoming Art School together...

That said, it is very interesting that the portal poster is barely mentioned at all for the first chapter. In fact, telling it in the perspective of Saitou and Chie, characters that weren't introduced beforehand, really ups the intrigue factor!

Looking forward to reading more~

Boundaries

Chapter:1

Oct 17, 2021

Don't knw what happen but here's a pat from me:
( •́‿•̀)/^•ᴥ•^

The Time Capsule - Part 1

Chapter:10

Oct 17, 2021

That's her ultimate goal in the story, to go back home. We might not see the Family for some time but she would no doubt miss them despite how she acts as per usual

CirCular

Chapter:0

Oct 17, 2021

Oh, you are right abt "Someone observing Yang", although I would't say "from the shadows" though~
☆⌒(ゝ。∂)

We might be a long way from getting to that part plot-wise but I can assure you that we will get there (Eventually, at the snail-crawl pace that I am going with)...
(シ_ _)シ

CirCular

Chapter:1

Oct 17, 2021

To:ocrali

That's right! Each of the alphabet in the title represents a different perspective. So far we have:

Alpha: *** of the Eternal Coliseum
Beta: Yang of the A. Records

I will leave you to find out what the other alphabets represent~

CirCular

Chapter:2

Oct 17, 2021

To:Okamichan17301

I asked abt Haruhi since your story bears striking resemblance to it from what I understood so far, with the main characters having to go along with the antics of their friends who are atually gods of the universe unbeknownst to them and would efforltess destroy the world if they were even mildly annoyed

Arkashic Keys

Chapter:2

Oct 16, 2021

Ah, so the Arkashic Keys are referring to people with extraordinary prowess. What's the probability of meeting two within the span of hours in the same class? They've got to be rather rare, right?

Tell me, did you happen to watch Haruhi by chance?

"What did commas ever do to you that you have to exclude them from your life like this?"

Jokes aside, having commas might be better in breaking up the sentences into smaller readeable chunks but that is just a suggestion~

Looking forward to whenever the next chapter is up~

Don't worry. Your efforts will be rewarded!

Arkashic Keys

Chapter:2

Oct 16, 2021

A very interesting start as depicted by the synopsis. Nothing is shared so far on what kind of journey we would be having with Akira but I find myself looking forward to see what you have in stored for us!

Improvement-wise, it might be to your best interest to read through the first draft after you finished it to look out for grammatical errors and correct them.

Alternatively, if you are lazy (like me), just plug the whole chunk of words into Grammarly. Work wonders!

That said, the errors are minor so far and does not impede the readers' understanding, so there is no urgent need for you to follow through with the above suggestion~

Off to the next chap~
ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

Arkashic Keys

Chapter:1

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