Nov 23, 2022
To:Xiellion
thank you SO much for taking the time to read through to the end and for leaving such lovely comments, I had a blast re-reading through with some of your notes and perspective, which was really helpful! I'm really glad to hear that the story fit the school prompt and the execution of the idea was enjoyable, despite the concept being a little generic haha!
and I always very much appreciate critique, so thank you so much for taking the time to note some down! and you've put it very well imo, the story did slowly evolve to be something different than I originally set out to write and yeah, the supernatural stuff pretty much disappears halfway through (at least the fighting aspect), which on a rewrite/edit I definitely want to tighten! and ooh a very good catch w/ Saori's personality, that's something I definitely didn't really consider so thank you for bringing it to attention!
all in all, thank you so much for reading and for your comments (and for paying attention to the chapter titles! I had a ton of fun coming up with them), I appreciate it a ton!! <3
